[Shadow Line Studio] Broken Down

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Kevmaster
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[Shadow Line Studio] Broken Down

Post by Kevmaster » Thu Aug 02, 2007 11:52 am



After 8 Months of Editors Block, I finnally finished a new serious full Video.

I hope you enjoy ^_^ Any Comments or Opinions are appreciated!

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omegaevolution
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Post by omegaevolution » Thu Aug 02, 2007 11:56 am

more AC? >.>U, errr ok I will check it out anyway :P

*downloads*

EDIT: well the editing (beat synch to be precise) wasn't constant, the first chorus felt too slow compared to the others and some flashes were off :shock: . Quality was great IMO. The ending felt a bit rushed, like you could have put more Sephiroth fight before the end, cause there was like what? 10 secs of Sephiroth and then it was over lol (even if I know tht battle is the most overused). Overall I think this could have had more work (editing wise) but I still liked it :) .

3/5 from me :P
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Post by Knappster » Thu Aug 02, 2007 11:57 am

ZOMFG!!!!!

GETS- definately expect an opinion kev
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Post by DaCoolGohan » Thu Aug 02, 2007 12:07 pm

Overall I didn't like this video. Your editing was really weird because you didn't do the same thing through the whole video. You would be timing all the beats to something and then stopped doing that and had a slow moving scene to a section of the music that didn't really call for it and it dragged for too long. During the parts of the song that called for a lot of action you didn't have much and most of the timing was off because you'd do a cut to a big beat and then have someone get hit after the big beat already happened. The part of the song before the crescendo 1:52-2:06 really dragged and you had barely any timing to the beats in that section which didn't really fit at all to me. Then you didn't even use a scene where there was a lot of action for the crescendo which made almost no sense to me. I also am not sure what source you were using but it looks like you overfiltered the video. The colors didn't look at all like the R1 and either you used a different source or you changed the colorspace but it didn't make AC look very good. Also something you did while editing the video made the footage not look solid the whole time. It looks like the motion was blurred a bit and I'm not sure what that is from but it made AC look lower quality. Overall it was a decent video but I've made a Broken Down AMV before so its pretty hard for me to like this video that much because it didn't one up what I did in my AMV. Overall I'd give the video a 2/5 for effort.

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Post by Knappster » Thu Aug 02, 2007 12:28 pm

your op is up. i give it a 4.5/5 =)
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Post by Emotive » Thu Aug 02, 2007 12:42 pm

Kev ish my emo nigger
3/5
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Niwa
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Post by Niwa » Thu Aug 02, 2007 12:44 pm

O:
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Post by Shinodude » Thu Aug 02, 2007 1:14 pm

I pretty much feel the same as omega


3/5


try to hit the same beat consistantly

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Post by ShatteredFlame » Thu Aug 02, 2007 1:23 pm

3.5/5
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Post by dreamawake » Thu Aug 02, 2007 1:28 pm

DaCoolGohan wrote:Overall I didn't like this video. Your editing was really weird because you didn't do the same thing through the whole video. You would be timing all the beats to something and then stopped doing that and had a slow moving scene to a section of the music that didn't really call for it and it dragged for too long. During the parts of the song that called for a lot of action you didn't have much and most of the timing was off because you'd do a cut to a big beat and then have someone get hit after the big beat already happened. The part of the song before the crescendo 1:52-2:06 really dragged and you had barely any timing to the beats in that section which didn't really fit at all to me. Then you didn't even use a scene where there was a lot of action for the crescendo which made almost no sense to me. I also am not sure what source you were using but it looks like you overfiltered the video. The colors didn't look at all like the R1 and either you used a different source or you changed the colorspace but it didn't make AC look very good. Also something you did while editing the video made the footage not look solid the whole time. It looks like the motion was blurred a bit and I'm not sure what that is from but it made AC look lower quality. Overall it was a decent video but I've made a Broken Down AMV before so its pretty hard for me to like this video that much because it didn't one up what I did in my AMV. Overall I'd give the video a 1/5 for effort.
Fix'd and x2.

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