"...Angel", a Kanon TV - 2006) video

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"...Angel", a Kanon TV - 2006) video

Post by Wonderduck » Sat May 26, 2007 8:25 pm

When I started this video, I had no idea it'd take me two months to do. But, I had to do it: when a concept pops, fully formed, out of nowhere like it did, I knew it wouldn't leave me alone until it was finished.

The concept? "What happens a couple of years down the line, AFTER Kanon 2006 ends?" "...Angel" is one possibility, and was a blast to make. It's not full of SFX; it is, after all, the first time I ever touched Premiere, but mildly independent reaction has been good so far.

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And now it's been released into the wild. Please, take a look!
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Post by OropherZero » Sat May 26, 2007 10:09 pm

not bad, just a couple of issues i had with the vid:

1. some parts had a bit too much lip flapping
2. putting the guy from AIR into it threw me off ~_~
3. you reused the kiss scene =O

overall i liked it tho 3.5/5 =)

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Post by jade_eyed_angel » Sat May 26, 2007 10:46 pm

OropherZero wrote:not bad, just a couple of issues i had with the vid:

1. some parts had a bit too much lip flapping
2. putting the guy from AIR into it threw me off ~_~
3. you reused the kiss scene =O

overall i liked it tho 3.5/5 =)
hmm... x2 on the lip flaps.. oand on yukito.. i didn't get that at all...?
i like how you used the kiss scene though =P

anyways cute vid... nice song choice, seems to fit well.
i watched it, i thought it was nice, then i went back and read your vid description. i must say. i didn't really get a strong impression of yuuichi cheating on ayu, actually i think it would have come off stronger if i didn't see kanon originally... but otherwise the only reason i had any thoughts of that was because of the lyrics and those were the few lyrics i actually thought didn't match the story as well, but hey that's just me. =P i still enjoyed the vid a lot, so yea nice job. ^^
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Post by Wonderduck » Sat May 26, 2007 11:18 pm

jade_eyed_angel wrote:
OropherZero wrote:not bad, just a couple of issues i had with the vid:

1. some parts had a bit too much lip flapping
2. putting the guy from AIR into it threw me off ~_~
3. you reused the kiss scene =O

overall i liked it tho 3.5/5 =)
hmm... x2 on the lip flaps.. oand on yukito.. i didn't get that at all...?
i like how you used the kiss scene though =P

anyways cute vid... nice song choice, seems to fit well.
i watched it, i thought it was nice, then i went back and read your vid description. i must say. i didn't really get a strong impression of yuuichi cheating on ayu... (snip) ...i still enjoyed the vid a lot, so yea nice job. ^^
Both of you, thanks for your comments!

The lip flaps: yep. Totally agree. In my defense, your honors, it IS my first video, and it WAS the first time I ever touched Premiere; just doing this much took me around 120-150 hours of work... throwing more than just simple Photoshop projects into the mix (and lipsynch/lipstill isn't 'simple') would have left me in tears, I think.

Technically, I didn't reuse the kiss scene, as it's two different shots from two different episodes (picky, picky!). I know what you're saying though.

The Yukito thing does seem to be the vid's bugaboo. It's all in the lyrics, though. FWIW, I did try to change it after the initial betatest, but couldn't come up with anything that worked well AND made me happy with the result.

Oh, Yuuichi isn't cheating on Ayu... he may be cheating on Nayuki though. If you think of the vid as happening 'in the future', after Yuiichi and Ayu went their seperate ways, that's what I was trying to set up.
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Post by yumi+chan » Tue May 29, 2007 9:12 am

Nice and cute video, I enjoyed it^^
And I really need to watch this series >-<
I didn't really like that you've put that guy from AIR in though.

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