Hopefully this will make you CRY

manganime02 · Post by **manganime02** » Thu Jan 05, 2006 1:26 pm

Well most probably not but there's only one way to find out.

Anyway here it is my 2nd AMV

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=102636

Song: 3 Doors Down- here Without You

Anime: DBZ History of Trunks

Thanx in advance

YouTube · Post by **Kionon** » Fri Jan 06, 2006 2:16 am

It made me cry all right... Let's talk about why:

The audio didn't start until four seconds after the video started. The video is in wmv, and this is probably somewhere around the lower third of wmv videos quality-wise. Full-screening was torture. The beginning of the video sort of made sense, but the scenes you chose were left too long. The fighting scenes really added nothing, like most DBZ videos set to dramatic songs. And finally, I'm confused about your concept. I kind of sort of got the whole father-son thing, but this is a love ballad, and so I felt you were trying to hard to force the relationship into this song. It wouldn't have worked with a father-son relationship in a more dramatic series, and it certainly doesn't work with DBZ. Despite the yaoi lovers out there, Vegeta and Trunks are not having an incestuous gay relationship.

Shinodude · Post by **Shinodude** » Fri Jan 06, 2006 2:33 am

Kionon wrote:Vegeta and Trunks are not having an incestuous gay relationship.

ROFL......................

but then agin is this the dudes first amv? also talk about a asshole you just came in flaming him out of knowhere

Shinodude · Post by **Shinodude** » Fri Jan 06, 2006 2:36 am

dang no edit button i ment to say this is the dudes 2nd amv

YouTube · Post by **Kionon** » Fri Jan 06, 2006 2:37 am

shinodude wrote:but then agin is this the dudes first amv? also talk about a asshole you just came in flaming him out of knowhere

Second, and I certainly did not flame. That was my honest opinion, and I stand by it. I pointed out what he needs to fix and I would be more than willing to help him work on things like video quality or editing synch.

I think you may have confused me with godix.

Shinodude · Post by **Shinodude** » Fri Jan 06, 2006 3:00 am

ya godix is an ass but I think you could have been nicer to him like not saying "this did make me cry heres why"

YouTube · Post by **Kionon** » Fri Jan 06, 2006 3:13 am

shinodude wrote:ya godix is an ass but I think you could have been nicer to him like not saying "this did make me cry heres why"

But isn't he just so amusing?

I could have been nicer, but I tend to be less lenient with individuals who have been on the org long enough to know better. Since this is the second vid, semi-random DBZ scenes should have appeared like a less than excellent idea to the OP. Just my opinion, and I'm not leaving it on the permanent opinion page anyway. Sometimes constructive criticism is harsh. *shrug*

manganime02 · Post by **manganime02** » Tue Jan 10, 2006 6:18 pm

Well that was the only video I had of this so I couldn't really help the original quality being bad, I know full screening it was crap but hey at least it makies it a smaller download- have to use what u got. The audio and video start at the same time not four seconds off, well I'm not gettin that problem anyway. And you say you got the whole father and son thing.....but there is no Vegeta at all in this vid.

Aww well at least it made you cry in one sense or the other.

shinodude wrote:
ROFL......................

but then agin is this the dudes first amv? also talk about a asshole you just came in flaming him out of knowhere