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by RyanGlazner » Mon Jul 29, 2002 2:06 am
Finally got a chance to download. This one's better than the first one. The timing is generally well done on the action scenes, but it could still use a little work. Try working with secondary beats. I'm not sure how to help you out beyond that. My main gripe is that it seemed too long. There were parts where it looks like you just put "filler" stuff in. I think if it were shorter (like editing the song to appropriate length) then it would have been better. The end fight scene was good. Timing through most of the scene seemed well thought out. Anyhow, that's just my two cents. Work on your timing and go for shorter clips/songs, so you don't have to use filler.