Maou sama Vs Lucifer - Deadwood AMV

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Maou sama Vs Lucifer - Deadwood AMV

Post by naniatsuya » Mon Aug 30, 2021 10:34 pm



This is my recent edit from the anime Hataraku Maou sama . Hope you like it and i'm open to feedback. If you feel anything can be improved please share it below. Thanks :D

Last edited by naniatsuya on Tue Aug 31, 2021 5:39 am, edited 1 time in total.

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Re: Maou sama Vs Lucifer - Deadwood AMV

Post by Kireblue » Mon Aug 30, 2021 10:39 pm

Welcome to the Org! The rules of announcing videos in the "AMV Announcement forum" require you to catalog your video first. So please do that as soon as possible. If you don't know how, here is the FAQ post about it: How to Catalog & Upload Videos

Until then, I'm going to move your thread to the “Awaiting Catalog Entry” forum. And I can move it back once I see that you've done it.


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Re: Maou sama Vs Lucifer - Deadwood AMV

Post by naniatsuya » Mon Aug 30, 2021 11:06 pm

But How do I catalog a video which is in youtube This is an offsite link right? Where do i need to edit in this ?

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Re: Maou sama Vs Lucifer - Deadwood AMV

Post by Kireblue » Mon Aug 30, 2021 11:25 pm

naniatsuya wrote:
Mon Aug 30, 2021 11:06 pm
But How do I catalog a video which is in youtube This is an offsite link right? Where do i need to edit in this ?
your video is cataloged, so I just moved it back.

If you want to add a youtube link to your video page, you can go to the edit video info page, and add it to the links section

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Re: Maou sama Vs Lucifer - Deadwood AMV

Post by seasons » Wed Sep 01, 2021 9:22 am

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That watermark pulls my eyes down into the corner and never surrenders its visual domination of this edit.

Cutting away from the split-screen shot at 0:08-0:09 after it's been on the screen for less than a second makes it look like it slipped in there by mistake.

I definitely get what you were going for here and the music definitely matches the scene pretty well. That said, except for some reaction shots of other characters being removed, this is basically a single scene with a new soundtrack on it. You've explored more transformative editing before this. Do you ever plan to try that again? Do you prefer one approach over the other?

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Re: Maou sama Vs Lucifer - Deadwood AMV

Post by naniatsuya » Wed Sep 01, 2021 10:47 am

Well i did try to do different styles and try new things at every video but i clearly understand that this work is comparatively a lot less intense and pretty much bad. thanks for your feedback ! I'll try to avoid doing these again keeping what you said in mind.

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