Erased | Paralyzed (AMV)
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Nootthepenguin
- Joined: Fri Nov 01, 2019 12:51 am
Erased | Paralyzed (AMV)
Hello everyone! This is my first AMV with my favorite anime, "Erased". I would love any sorts of feedback on the video so I can improve in the future! Personally I liked the outcome although I had to tweak some things due to copyright, but I know I can improve.
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ShizayaFanart
- Joined: Sat Mar 23, 2019 5:25 pm
Re: Erased | Paralyzed (AMV)
-I liked the filters and effects you used around the beginning, it really helped the mood.
-There were a handful of clips that you used multiple times. I could tell that you sort of struggled with finding good clips but I don't think there's any situation where reusing clips is a good idea.
-There was a good deal of clips where I could tell you sped it up a little bit. I get that you'd want to keep it moving but in places like 3:58-4:09 it looked pretty goofy.
-Along the same lines, there were a handful of clips that were kept short while the surrounding clips were long, which felt jarring. It's especially weird since you used long clips during the rap, which is obviously much faster than earlier in the song.
-Overall, it's great considering this is your first AMV. Definitely better than my first AMV.
-There were a handful of clips that you used multiple times. I could tell that you sort of struggled with finding good clips but I don't think there's any situation where reusing clips is a good idea.
-There was a good deal of clips where I could tell you sped it up a little bit. I get that you'd want to keep it moving but in places like 3:58-4:09 it looked pretty goofy.
-Along the same lines, there were a handful of clips that were kept short while the surrounding clips were long, which felt jarring. It's especially weird since you used long clips during the rap, which is obviously much faster than earlier in the song.
-Overall, it's great considering this is your first AMV. Definitely better than my first AMV.
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Nootthepenguin
- Joined: Fri Nov 01, 2019 12:51 am
Re: Erased | Paralyzed (AMV)
Thank you so much for your feedback, I'll take it into consideration for my next AMV! I appreciate it a lotShizayaFanart wrote: ↑Sat Nov 02, 2019 7:19 pm-I liked the filters and effects you used around the beginning, it really helped the mood.
-There were a handful of clips that you used multiple times. I could tell that you sort of struggled with finding good clips but I don't think there's any situation where reusing clips is a good idea.
-There was a good deal of clips where I could tell you sped it up a little bit. I get that you'd want to keep it moving but in places like 3:58-4:09 it looked pretty goofy.
-Along the same lines, there were a handful of clips that were kept short while the surrounding clips were long, which felt jarring. It's especially weird since you used long clips during the rap, which is obviously much faster than earlier in the song.
-Overall, it's great considering this is your first AMV. Definitely better than my first AMV.
