Light Delight ~ BangDream AMV

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Light Delight ~ BangDream AMV

Post by NekoUmii » Wed May 22, 2019 9:44 pm

https://www.dropbox.com/s/g3k6ze7i5ft0j ... 9.mp4?dl=0

Alright this was my first time trying to make An AMV I know it may look bad compared to what you mostly see but I just want some thoughts on it

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Re: Light Delight ~ BangDream AMV

Post by seasons » Fri May 24, 2019 6:21 pm

I'd try to track down clean opening and ending sequences if you want to feature parts of them very prominently in your video.

I most enjoyed the parts of this video that had action scenes and shots of the characters doing things in a space. There were a lot of closeups of faces in this video, which is fine, but I think it's better to limit that to shorter cuts than what's here. A lot of scenes of characters talking in this that didn't really suck me in as a viewer.

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