Boku no Hero Academia AMV - Dark Eyes

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Lizette77
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Boku no Hero Academia AMV - Dark Eyes

Postby Lizette77 » Sat Jun 09, 2018 8:08 pm

Hi lovely people,
I made a BNHA amv as you can see. ^w^
It's dark af but I have no regrets.

Also I kinda killed Izuku in this,
Sorry not sorry lmao.



Tell me what you think of it, please!
I tried to make it a smooth and flowy edit, did it work?

Video: Dark Eyes
Category: Action, Horror
Anime: Boku no Hero Academia
Song: Dark Eyes
Artist: Rusty K
Creator: Lizette77

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Pysh
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Re: Boku no Hero Academia AMV - Dark Eyes

Postby Pysh » Sun Jun 10, 2018 12:14 pm

Seems like an experimental amv and some things in there looks kind of cool but there are some transitions like at 0:04 that are pretty hard or overdone. Also the fades didn't feel right, so work on it but apart from that it's a fine experimental video.
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Lizette77
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Re: Boku no Hero Academia AMV - Dark Eyes

Postby Lizette77 » Sun Jun 10, 2018 1:41 pm

Pysh wrote:Seems like an experimental amv and some things in there looks kind of cool but there are some transitions like at 0:04 that are pretty hard or overdone. Also the fades didn't feel right, so work on it but apart from that it's a fine experimental video.


Thank you for the criticism!
But asdfg I thought that the heavy transition at 0:04 really fitted the mood, so it's a surprise.
And if you could specify, what do you mean by "the fades didn't feel right"? That I didn't time them out correctly? Or the fades themselves felt wrong?

Thank you once again, your comment means a lot <3

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Re: Boku no Hero Academia AMV - Dark Eyes

Postby vkamv » Wed Jun 13, 2018 8:17 pm

Interesting work. Very short but also engaging. I feel it's brief length adds to the impact. I thought the choice of transitions were great. They were strong and fit the dark tone you were aiming for, and you had a good variety of different blur and blend effects. The transition between 14-15 was a bit sudden, probably because of the sudden change from bright white to dark black tones, but overall it was enjoyable to watch.

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Re: Boku no Hero Academia AMV - Dark Eyes

Postby Pysh » Thu Jun 14, 2018 2:31 pm

Lizette77 wrote:
Pysh wrote:Seems like an experimental amv and some things in there looks kind of cool but there are some transitions like at 0:04 that are pretty hard or overdone. Also the fades didn't feel right, so work on it but apart from that it's a fine experimental video.


Thank you for the criticism!
But asdfg I thought that the heavy transition at 0:04 really fitted the mood, so it's a surprise.
And if you could specify, what do you mean by "the fades didn't feel right"? That I didn't time them out correctly? Or the fades themselves felt wrong?

Thank you once again, your comment means a lot <3

You're welcome :) I just felt that the fades didn't fit there, may be because of its duration or it just didn't suit.
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