SINFUL (first AMV)

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Lampianna
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SINFUL (first AMV)

Post by Lampianna » Mon Aug 21, 2017 3:18 pm

Heya, this is my first AMV ever.
I welcome any feedback. <3



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Re: SINFUL (first AMV)

Post by Kireblue » Tue Aug 22, 2017 11:33 am

nice job. The editing and flow throughout the video was really good. I feel that you missed your opportunity to use some static and grain effects to match the static sound effects in the song, but the video was still pretty enjoyable. And you definitely did a good job at making the anime look interesting.

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Re: SINFUL (first AMV)

Post by Mol » Wed Aug 23, 2017 6:34 am

Ey not bad. For me maybe could use some more slight movements as it started to get somewhat stale with editing for me (i guess balance is here but still xd) Ending felt a bit meh.
Still better than that MMO.
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Re: SINFUL (first AMV)

Post by Lampianna » Thu Aug 24, 2017 9:27 am

@kireblue: Thank you very much, it makes me really happy you think it's a nice job. <3
I haven't notice the static sounds in the audio at all. I kinda knew they are there, but that's all. qq

@Mol: I am not sure if I know what do you mean with "slight movements". And I know the end of the video is really week, I was out of good scenes. ._. I will try to edit the timeline more evenly next time!

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