AMV mix: The Moments That Break Us

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NTnight
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AMV mix: The Moments That Break Us

Post by NTnight » Wed Aug 17, 2016 12:53 pm

Video: The Moments That Break Us
Category: Sentimental
Anime: Kokoro Connect, Tokyo Magnitude 8, Full Metal Alchemist: Brotherhood, Akame Ga Kill, Sakurasou no Pet na Kanojo, Nisekoi, Naruto, Anohana
Toradora, Death Parade, Tokyo Ghoul, Fairy Tail, Angel Beats
Song: Unsteady
Artist: X Ambassadors

This is my first AMV using Adobe After Effects. The editing gets kind of sketchy at some points in the AMV but my editing skills have improved a lot over the course of making this AMV. I hope you enjoy it. If you have any tips or constructive criticism/feedback please let me know, I'm always looking for more ways to improve on my editing.


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Pysh
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Re: AMV mix: The Moments That Break Us

Post by Pysh » Wed Aug 17, 2016 1:50 pm

I felt a little low when it started... But when those common effects came in it really changed the atmosphere. I really like the Scenes and Synchronization :) That's something Good I observed in this Your Presentation. And as for others things, I think the blurs and Transitions weren't Proper and Smooth either. Anyway, overall It's a Good AMV :)
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Re: AMV mix: The Moments That Break Us

Post by NTnight » Wed Aug 17, 2016 2:45 pm

Thanks! Yeah I see what you mean my blurs especially seem pretty off overall. I will definitely have to work on making those better for my next AMV. Thanks for the feedback

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Re: AMV mix: The Moments That Break Us

Post by exkcal » Wed Aug 17, 2016 4:18 pm

Nice transitions, Im sure some will find it chessy but I actually liked the flow it created. I would just recommend using cold cuts instead of fades in the start to create a more jarring feeling.

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Re: AMV mix: The Moments That Break Us

Post by NTnight » Thu Aug 18, 2016 4:31 pm

I agree. I really need to get used to using cold cuts more. I always feel like I need to do something more then just a regular cut. Thanks for the feedback!

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