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[Zankyou no Terror] AMV - The End Where We Start
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Aevision
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[Zankyou no Terror] AMV - The End Where We Start
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Kireblue
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Re: [Zankyou no Terror] AMV - The End Where We Start
You did a pretty nice job at editing this. Its just that your text distracts the viewer from noticing the good sync at first. When I kinda zoned out the text, I was able to enjoy your video a whole lot more. Having every lyric of your song on screen is never a good idea and only serves as a distraction to the viewer. There are times when the text of a single word or phrase can help give some extra flair to a scene, but I don't think that it benefited this particular video at all. But like I said before, outside of from that, the editing was pretty solid 
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Aevision
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Re: [Zankyou no Terror] AMV - The End Where We Start
I can see your point now that I viewed my video with your feedback in mind, and I have to agree that less text on screen would be a better choice after all. Thanks for the feedback Kireblue!