AMV - Shirayuki and Zen - Shattered

[Dancer_sys]

Video: Zen and Shirayuki
Category: Romantic
Song: Shattered
Artist: Trading testurday
Creator: Dancer_sys

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[exkcal]

This amv is pretty nice but my only issue with the amv is how distracting some of the transitions are. The transitions are well made but instead of using some sort of flash with 3/4ths of the transitions kind of sucks me out of it. If you could have just done a zoom with blur minus the flash i feel like the amv would have been more engaging. I am looking forward for more. Good luck!

[Dancer_sys]

Thanks a lot!! I'll try the next time! Thanks =)

[tayuyashoujo]

This was a pretty sweet, classic romance. I do agree with exkcal on the transitions; a lot of them were very distracting and far too harsh for this song, and you should also watch out for quick flashes of unwanted scenes when you made your cuts. There were a couple of those throughout the video where you made the cut a bit too late and I could see the scene that came afterwards. My other critique is that during the climax you shifted to using a lot of fight scenes and clips from the OP to keep up with the pace of the song (which you did do well with), but since the rest of the AMV focused exclusively on the romance it felt pretty out-of-place.

[Dancer_sys]

I shall consider it, thank you very much! YOur advices are very important and usefull for me.