Revelation (psychedelic amv?)

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Revelation (psychedelic amv?)

Post by Sephirothskr » Fri Mar 04, 2016 1:28 am

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Worked a few months on this, tried to do a direct sequel to s'evade, this is essentially the result. Enjoy

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Re: Revelation (psychedelic amv?)

Post by UnluckyArtist » Fri Mar 04, 2016 7:07 pm

I R proud. This is clearly your best so far, I see you put a lot of careful tech work into it, you studied up, learned some new stuff and made something kickass :up: Using Monogatar and Madoka as the only sources was a bit weird though, as they're pretty different from each other but adding two or more sources could've really boosted this. As solid as the atmosphere was it was difficult to understand the biblical message, like the text might have done better at the beginning to establish that message, and the "Acts" could be more different from each other by having a changing pace or different anime usage and THAT is how you could've kept the 2 anime and still have a strong concept, Act 1 could of been all monogat footage and Act 2 could be all madokadonk footage. Nicely done

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Re: Revelation (psychedelic amv?)

Post by King Redeem » Fri Mar 04, 2016 9:12 pm

I agree with UnluckyArtist that the combo of Madoka and Monogatari as the only sources felt a bit off... However, you did a great job with color corrections, etc. to make them mesh as well as they could. The effects felt very professional, well-executed. The occasional lyric sync was a nice touch.

Overall, I liked it!! Good job

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Re: Revelation (psychedelic amv?)

Post by Sephirothskr » Sat Mar 05, 2016 7:37 am

King Redeem wrote:I agree with UnluckyArtist that the combo of Madoka and Monogatari as the only sources felt a bit off... However, you did a great job with color corrections, etc. to make them mesh as well as they could. The effects felt very professional, well-executed. The occasional lyric sync was a nice touch.

Overall, I liked it!! Good job

Thanks guys. ^^

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Re: Revelation (psychedelic amv?)

Post by Kireblue » Wed Mar 16, 2016 11:39 am

Just like the previous commenters, I was at first thrown off by the 2 anime sources, but once I got over that, I started to realize how well you were transitioning between them. Really good job on this one :up: I think that some of your color alterations were just a little too much, but that's a small complaint.

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Re: Revelation (psychedelic amv?)

Post by Jedinovice » Wed Mar 16, 2016 4:18 pm

Technically brilliant but not to my taste.
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Re: Revelation (psychedelic amv?)

Post by Sephirothskr » Thu Mar 17, 2016 1:01 pm

Jedinovice wrote:Technically brilliant but not to my taste.

Yeah.. I can understand why. I tried to do it a wee bit different than the average video of mine. As to why I went with those two sources, it's the weirdness and symmetry both of the shows have. Like, death the kid would be having a hay day in these shows. So I kind of drew off of that symmetry and weirdness as kind of the overarching theme to draw the two together.

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