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Re: Attack On Titan - Still Broken AMV

Post by Shinzui IT » Wed Jan 06, 2016 3:02 pm

Great choice in sources, but the edit doesn't really seem right to me.
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Re: Attack On Titan - Still Broken AMV

Post by Joy's AMV » Tue Jan 12, 2016 5:12 pm

Kisagi wrote:Great choice in sources, but the edit doesn't really seem right to me.

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Re: Attack On Titan - Still Broken AMV

Post by exkcal » Tue Jan 12, 2016 7:15 pm

I am not going to really talk about anything wrong with the amv but I really enjoyed it! It is my type of style. These type of songs are my favorite for amvs!

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Re: Attack On Titan - Still Broken AMV

Post by The_McLaughlin » Wed Jan 13, 2016 5:19 am

I really enjoyed this one, the source fit the song choice really well. Kisagi mentioned that the edit didn't really seem to fit to them, I would agree in some places, but for the most part I would say it was paced pretty well. An example of what I talking about when it didn't seem to fit would be in the beginning portion where you have the flashbacks of each of the characters, the last two; Mikasa's flash back and Erin's final flashback when his mother gets eaten, seemed very fast for that particular portion of the song. Likewise when the song picks up in intensity for the first time some of the action clips seemed a bit long and made the pacing kind of drag out a bit, such as at roughly 0:56 where you see Erin tumble accross the roof top after the Titan bites him. To me it just seemed to stay on that clip too long. Also the cross fades in the action sequence kind of made it drag a bit as they were a bit long and didn't really seem to hit on a beat or if they did hit on a beat carried over past the beat long enough to make them seem off.
However this was an enjoyable amv to watch and I really loved how you chose to focus on their pasts intermixed with the action aspects of the video. Good job, and hope to see more from you in the future.

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Re: Attack On Titan - Still Broken AMV

Post by Joy's AMV » Tue Jan 19, 2016 7:13 am

animefreak7 wrote:I really enjoyed this one, the source fit the song choice really well. Kisagi mentioned that the edit didn't really seem to fit to them, I would agree in some places, but for the most part I would say it was paced pretty well. An example of what I talking about when it didn't seem to fit would be in the beginning portion where you have the flashbacks of each of the characters, the last two; Mikasa's flash back and Erin's final flashback when his mother gets eaten, seemed very fast for that particular portion of the song. Likewise when the song picks up in intensity for the first time some of the action clips seemed a bit long and made the pacing kind of drag out a bit, such as at roughly 0:56 where you see Erin tumble accross the roof top after the Titan bites him. To me it just seemed to stay on that clip too long. Also the cross fades in the action sequence kind of made it drag a bit as they were a bit long and didn't really seem to hit on a beat or if they did hit on a beat carried over past the beat long enough to make them seem off.
However this was an enjoyable amv to watch and I really loved how you chose to focus on their pasts intermixed with the action aspects of the video. Good job, and hope to see more from you in the future.

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