[AMV] Owari No Seraph - Throne

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[AMV] Owari No Seraph - Throne

Post by BloodCurse » Mon Dec 28, 2015 7:12 pm

Hey Guys,
I hope you enjoy it. Im open for every feedback and I will try to answer all questions. :)

Anime: Owari No Seraph: Nagoya Kessen-hen
Song: Bring me the horizon - Throne


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Re: [AMV] Owari No Seraph - Throne

Post by exkcal » Mon Dec 28, 2015 7:18 pm

How long did it take to make?

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Re: [AMV] Owari No Seraph - Throne

Post by BloodCurse » Mon Dec 28, 2015 9:42 pm

I needed 12 - 13 hours to edit it. Also I tried to use some new effects but I think I need to master them a bit more. :D

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Re: [AMV] Owari No Seraph - Throne

Post by exkcal » Tue Dec 29, 2015 1:47 am

I am new to making amvs, I want to further my editing skills. What program/plugins do you use?

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Re: [AMV] Owari No Seraph - Throne

Post by BloodCurse » Tue Dec 29, 2015 9:06 am

I use Sony Vegas Pro 13. :)

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Re: [AMV] Owari No Seraph - Throne

Post by The_McLaughlin » Mon Jan 04, 2016 1:58 am

I really really like the first :55 seconds. It flows pretty nice and for the most part fits really well. It does seem to drag a bit in some places but for the most part that first :55 seconds was great and hooked me really well. Song fit the source pretty well, I haven't seen the show but I kind of want to now that I've watched this amv.
There are alot of parts that kid of drag compared to the music, at :47 at :53 right around where that :55 seconds kind of starts to slow down for me you sit on the locked swords clip, and the clip of the guy with the three swords in the air in front of him a bit long compared to the beats in the song. From 1:18 to roughtly 2:20ish feels really long because it's all from the same fight without much breaking it up. The close up reaction shots of the other characters help, but it's basically one scene that covers almost half of the amv. That's really where it starts dragging. It seems like there may have been a chance for a flashback between the two characters who flee the battle, or maybe survive the battle but are wounded, in that slower area right after the fight but it stayed on the guy in the white suit still being attacked. There since there was so much of a change in the music would have probablly been a really good place to switch things up a bit and may have helped the amv out a bit.
Overall not bad. This had some really good parts in it that I enjoyed, and represented the show pretty well since it made me want to go and check it out. Good job on this one.

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Re: [AMV] Owari No Seraph - Throne

Post by BloodCurse » Mon Jan 04, 2016 9:24 am

Thank you animefreak7 for you're feedback and you're point of view of my AMV. It really helps me to understand where my weak spots are and where I need to concentrate alot more to make a good AMV. :D

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