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DonQuichotte Doflamingo - Hate Me ! • | One Piece | •「AMV」 ᴴᴰ

Post by MAK 405 » Thu Dec 24, 2015 7:00 pm

Hi guys ... it's MAK 405 , I'm Back with a new amv about the most epic villain in One Piece .. it's about the celestial Dragon Don Quixote Doflamingo !!






I Hope that every one enjoy it and give me their ideas in the comments .. and support my new channel with a subscribe ...​

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Re: DonQuichotte Doflamingo - Hate Me ! • | One Piece | •「AMV」 ᴴᴰ

Post by Shinee » Mon Jan 04, 2016 2:57 pm

Love Doflamingo ♥
Nice Work mate.
-Shinee
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다보지마му ηαмє ιѕ ѕнιηєє.최유미
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Re: DonQuichotte Doflamingo - Hate Me ! • | One Piece | •「AMV」 ᴴᴰ

Post by The_McLaughlin » Tue Jan 05, 2016 3:20 am

I really like that you decided to focus on one character for the amv, I also really like that you decided to focus on a villian as they aren't typically the focus of most amvs. So I thought the concept was pretty cool.
That said in order to improve for next time there; was a lot of not timed all that well portions of the amv. In action amvs I tend to like things inside the clip and scene transitions to happen on beats it makes the amv look tighter as a whole in my opinion. So I would say just try to work more on your sync to makes things look tighter.
Subtitles were a bit distracting, maybe try to find some footage without them included. Along the same note as subtitles and also kind of on the sync aspect too. You put some lyrics on the screen, not alot, but they weren't always synced with the lyrics being sung for example at :46 you have "I love the way you hate me" pop up on the screen and it spins away before the line is even sung. I typically don't like lyrics to be placed on the screen in the first place as kind of like subtitles I find them distracting unless they're used really well. Unfortunatly with it being mist timed by that noticible of an amount with an animation on them to make them more noticibly off it does kind of negativly hurt the video.
Also the last 1/2-1/4 of the amv kind of just seemed like one big fight scene plopped on top with little to no editing. Kind of goes back into sync a bit, but don't be afraid to chop it up, make things sync, only use what you absolutly need to to tell you concept/story.
Otherwise good job. I love the influx of One Piece amvs here lately, and hope to see more from you soon.

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