Sick of the Human Race - Tokyo Ghoul [AMV]
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Re: Sick of the Human Race - Tokyo Ghoul [AMV]
your vid could use some more focus. The scenes that you choose, the characters you showcased, and your sequence of evens don't really feel related to each other. Limiting your scene selection to a smaller group of characters and a more coherent sequence of events would have helped a lot.
