Premonicion - TritioAFB

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Premonicion - TritioAFB

Post by TritioAFB » Fri Jul 03, 2015 5:32 pm

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Re: Premonicion - TritioAFB

Post by Kireblue » Thu Jul 09, 2015 12:18 pm

I feel that the pace of the vid is a little weird because you shifted through events within the story faster than the song was shifting through its verses and choruses. Because of it, there was a disconnect with the mood even though the anime/ song combo works.

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Re: Premonicion - TritioAFB

Post by CacoVenom » Sun Jul 12, 2015 8:04 pm

ve por ellos bro xd

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Re: Premonicion - TritioAFB

Post by Cenit » Mon Jul 13, 2015 6:15 am

This kind of drama and sadness is not really my type of AMV. However, i think you could improve on the editing part. Less frantic beat synch and more internal. Because some of those scenes are very beautiful. You need to give some time to the viewer who has not seen this Anime. Give them a chance to fully grasp what's going on. Don't just bombard them with scenes and rush through the content.
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Re: Premonicion - TritioAFB

Post by TritioAFB » Wed Jul 15, 2015 12:27 pm

I was thinking contacting you, Cenit for my last video of this year, since it's story-oriented. And thanks everyone for the comments :up:
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