. Thought I still feel that it doesn't differ that much technically wise from your last one (probably because focusing on one "thing" is kinda double edged sword too 
). I guess this mostly lacked sync/pacing with sounds in music. I guess it kinda works lyric wise, so its something positive. 
. Might be also smart to grab some more experienced friend/ someone willing to offer help to criticize video for while it's in making. Maybe that will help you in that matter. 
Thank you for the feedback and I know I didnt do cuts to sync near as much this time I was trying to make the different things happening within the scenes themselves to be the actual syncing and try and make the scenes display the emotion the artist was trying to get across but i guess i didnt do too well on it /facepalm. I will continue to study and and do better. Thank you for telling your honest opinion though I wont let it go to waste now I just need to fix.M'o'l wrote:Mhm , well lack of subs and tv station logo is a good start
I think you might not be fit for such music yet, can be easier for you to find something a bit less demanding synch wise where you can get calmly used to pacing and cutting to song for beginning
Beginnings aren't easy for everyone
xD !!
Thank you for both actions and the words. Sorry I forgot about the 1 a week rule I made the 3rd one so fast to try and make up for my 2nd amv :l . Thank u as always I hope to not let u down again.Ileia wrote:I merged your two topics together since as per the forum rules, you may only make one new thread per week. If you have multiple videos to announce, either wait a week or add them to the same post.
As for the video, I could definitely see improvement over your previous ones already. Just make sure that you don't fall back on using the anime's audio as an introduction every time, that can get a bit stale. Plus it's good to experiment with different ways of editing the introduction.