The editing was definitely top notch

. But I couldn't help loosing interest in it due to the scenes of them hitting the ball back and forth being so similar to eachother. Of course, that's not your fault though. What else can you do with a Ping Pong anime

Ironically, when the scene of the bird man happened at 2:55, I suddenly because interested again in what you were planning on doing, but I lost interest again at 3:28 when you went back to the ping pong scenes. I haven't seen the show, and so I don't know what footage you actually have, but I would have liked to see another break from the ping pong to develop the characters more and make your scenes more varied.