「AMV」[AS] Get Out Of The Water !!!

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AllegoryStark
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「AMV」[AS] Get Out Of The Water !!!

Post by AllegoryStark » Mon Mar 02, 2015 9:49 am

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Title: OUT OF WATER
Creator: Allegory Stark (AS)
Anime: ONE PIECE MOVIE AND ANIME
Category: ACTION, SENTIMENTAL, SERIOUS, ETC.
Song: OUT THE WATER BY FABIO LENDRUM (501 REMIX)

Hi guys ! I started this AMV at the end of December 2014. First part of the work, it took two full week of work. Every time I finish the AMV, I always had the impression that something is missing or wrong. I feel sad when I didn't change ahah ! From the bottom to the final result, it take me about 20 rework. After the first part, I decided to participate in AMV Contest. So I start to rework my AMV to look better. The real struggle I had to do that was intense !! I always had problem with logo or bug. I want to do my best, but I was never satisfied of the change. God know how much how much I raged. After all these good and bad things, I created the intro and outro for Youtube.

Really hope you like this AMV !

Don't forget to watch my other AMV's: MY PLAYLISTE

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Re: 「AMV」[AS] Get Out Of The Water !!!

Post by PrincessMareep » Mon Mar 02, 2015 7:22 pm

My personal opinion is that it's not bad but at sometimes I feel like there was too much of a sensory overload to the viewer. For example with all the heavy effects, the text, and the Japanese audio over the music. None of those are normally too much of an issue, but I felt like it was overbearing with they way you had executed it. I'd also personally try to sync the clips a bit more with the beat that to rely on the heavy effects to go with the flow of the song. As for the logo, you can easily crop that out! Otherwise I don't think it's too bad of an amv!
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Re: 「AMV」[AS] Get Out Of The Water !!!

Post by AllegoryStark » Mon Mar 02, 2015 8:21 pm

PrincessMareep wrote:My personal opinion is that it's not bad but at sometimes I feel like there was too much of a sensory overload to the viewer. For example with all the heavy effects, the text, and the Japanese audio over the music. None of those are normally too much of an issue, but I felt like it was overbearing with they way you had executed it. I'd also personally try to sync the clips a bit more with the beat that to rely on the heavy effects to go with the flow of the song. As for the logo, you can easily crop that out! Otherwise I don't think it's too bad of an amv!
Thank You ! I will take note of your advice.

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Re: 「AMV」[AS] Get Out Of The Water !!!

Post by 8bitcritr » Mon Mar 02, 2015 9:32 pm

The bell at the end was a little off but the sentiment of it was awesome! One of the best One piece Amvs I've seen for sure. As for "sensory overload" mentioned by PrincessMareep. I wouldn't say that it went THAT far. All the fast motion and sound effects make for a good action atmosphere. I do think the timing could have used a little more tweaking though. Not that the timing was horrible but it could have been a little more exact. Also the lightning still at :23 I thought was unnecessary. This video KICKED ASS!!
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Re: 「AMV」[AS] Get Out Of The Water !!!

Post by AllegoryStark » Tue Mar 03, 2015 7:41 am

8bitcritr wrote:The bell at the end was a little off but the sentiment of it was awesome! One of the best One piece Amvs I've seen for sure. As for "sensory overload" mentioned by PrincessMareep. I wouldn't say that it went THAT far. All the fast motion and sound effects make for a good action atmosphere. I do think the timing could have used a little more tweaking though. Not that the timing was horrible but it could have been a little more exact. Also the lightning still at :23 I thought was unnecessary. This video KICKED ASS!!
Thank You ! For sure, I think I put a little bit too much effect. I will try to avoid it next time.

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