Yo check out and give me some feedback, was my first go and was a pretty fun experience.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZUcAYiq9FLA
First try at an AMV - Tokyo Ghoul: I Don't Want This
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The_McLaughlin
- Joined: Sat Oct 13, 2007 12:12 am
Re: First try at an AMV - Tokyo Ghoul: I Don't Want This
Pretty good for a first amv. Had some good timing in it, I would say you've got the idea of a concept down pretty well, and your timing isn't bad either, maybe just continue to work towards making everything flow really nicely. Here's a link to a tutorial on youtube that I liked that I think has helped me quite a bit in improving my flow:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J5Jjxb6Lw7s
Good job and hope to see some more from you soon.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J5Jjxb6Lw7s
Good job and hope to see some more from you soon.
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Naisto
- Joined: Sat Jan 10, 2015 9:29 pm
Re: First try at an AMV - Tokyo Ghoul: I Don't Want This
cheers man, I had it in the back of my mind to have my own version of whatever flow is (now i know thanks for that link it should help out heaps) i think the main problem i had is the song choice probably wasn't ideal for a rookie scrub like me, since it had way too much fast electronic beats here and there and since the bloody waveform was at max clip size the whole time i could hardly tell where the beats began or ended XD! also i got a bit tiresome halfway and stopped editing the clips with effects as much, but to be honest they actually were better than the ones i "tryhard" edited. Also my vegas was pretty messy by the end... waaaay to many markers haha: http://gyazo.com/837f47065a1585fbcbec4d3d1eecc946 it stopped being able to number them after a point.animefreak00007 wrote:Pretty good for a first amv. Had some good timing in it, I would say you've got the idea of a concept down pretty well, and your timing isn't bad either, maybe just continue to work towards making everything flow really nicely. Here's a link to a tutorial on youtube that I liked that I think has helped me quite a bit in improving my flow:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J5Jjxb6Lw7s
Good job and hope to see some more from you soon.
so yeah next time ill probably just try go with a "easier" song to achieve some flow and other concepts, so i can nail them down and go for some obscure music like i did this time later.
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Shinzui IT
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Re: First try at an AMV - Tokyo Ghoul: I Don't Want This
I won't say much, but your scenes are way too static and your pacing needs to be improved. Hope to see you improve with your next!
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Naisto
- Joined: Sat Jan 10, 2015 9:29 pm
Re: First try at an AMV - Tokyo Ghoul: I Don't Want This
yeah for sure i agree, it was all a bit random this time around, ill try to make it a lot more smooth flowing for next timeKisagi wrote:I won't say much, but your scenes are way too static and your pacing needs to be improved. Hope to see you improve with your next!