Still Not Stabbing Into You

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Still Not Stabbing Into You

Post by dimster » Thu Oct 16, 2014 2:49 am



Hoping to get more feedback. :uhoh:
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Re: Still Not Stabbing Into You

Post by UnluckyArtist » Thu Oct 16, 2014 5:46 am

Ask and you shall receive :taco:
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Re: Still Not Stabbing Into You

Post by dimster » Thu Oct 16, 2014 8:21 am

UnluckyArtist wrote:Ask and you shall receive :taco:
Thanks for the :taco:
I've been doing without them for far too long. :awesome:
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Re: Still Not Stabbing Into You

Post by pan_dbgt01 » Thu Oct 16, 2014 10:08 pm

Not bad. Some of the lip synch looked like flap and the video could have been tighter, but it looks like you are still new to this, so it's not bad.
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Re: Still Not Stabbing Into You

Post by The_McLaughlin » Thu Oct 16, 2014 11:43 pm

Considering that this video seems to rely so heavily on lip sync I think you may have wanted to work more on that as it seemed off in a few places throughout. Otherwise seemed pretty solid.
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Re: Still Not Stabbing Into You

Post by dimster » Fri Oct 17, 2014 2:41 am

pan_dbgt01 wrote:Not bad. Some of the lip synch looked like flap and the video could have been tighter, but it looks like you are still new to this, so it's not bad.
I can't really say that I'm new. I've been editing non-amvs for quite a few years. I'm surrounded by people who can't give any proper criticism.
So I haven't improved much. But mostly its my own fault.
animefreak00007 wrote:Considering that this video seems to rely so heavily on lip sync I think you may have wanted to work more on that as it seemed off in a few places throughout. Otherwise seemed pretty solid.
UnluckyArtist had mentioned in his video opinion that I should tone down the lip sync and include more of other scenes.
I guess I should have gone with that approach as I seemed to have run out of suitable lip sync footage.

Thanks for the feedback guys.
I really enjoyed doing lip sync. Having a character sync so well to a song is just so satisfying. I think I have achieved some good syncs in this video.
I'm gonna try for a more balanced lip sync/action for my next amv.
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