MycathatesyouAMV wrote:That was pretty nice. The mood and pacing were well executed. Could go without the tv logos though.
Thanks for the comment! Usually, I painstakingly repair the source material and was going to take the easy way out with that by slapping on widescreen bars but it wasn't bothering me as much since I wasn't making it for a competition.
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Post Mortem:
So I have watched this several times and I am quite happy with the overall outcome. There are still some timing issues. The Intro scene of Lisa paying her respect could do with a few more frames.
Softer transitions between the death of 5 (eye zoom) and 12(to the building explosion).
A friend thought the Escape scene when 5 burns(she really loves fire) could be swapped around with the glass stare of 9 and 5 to emphasize the lyrics, which I can see working but still happy with my cut.
Also, wanted to add comparison shots for some improvements to the source. Not many will notice this, unless you plan on working on the source material but I am pleased with my effort. Some where done to improve the shot quality, others to help with my direction.
