The Light In The Dark (NDK)

blaksun · Post by **blaksun** » Wed Sep 17, 2014 11:15 am

Finally got around to upload it XD
made for the Toulouse Game Show, (2013)
this is slightly altered version i send in to Nan Desu Kan (2014)

Hope you enjoy it
and as all ways Constructive Criticism is wary welcome

Sephirothskr · Post by **Sephirothskr** » Wed Sep 17, 2014 3:48 pm

Well, I liked the concept. But I felt like when the song picked up or got heavy, you used more stagnant scenes with a lack of movement which kinda detracted from the whole experience. If you used more transitions on certain parts, at least a dissolve, it would of flowed so much better. I liked the part before he said the word "Ashes" and the guy was reloading. That was nice. Just be wary of timing and flow. Big big ones. For me, the reason for that is, if I know the song and I know at the end the music gets really heavy and awesome, then I expect the video to do the same. So careful on scene selection! Solid job anyhow. I'll be looking for the next one of yours.

(I'm sorry if I'm sounding like a douche or anything. I'm just trying to help.)

Org Profile · Post by **Replay Studios** » Thu Sep 18, 2014 2:35 pm

i like the idea a lot but it does feels rushed and rough, but keep it up ^^

blaksun · Post by **blaksun** » Sun Sep 21, 2014 3:48 pm

Sephirothskr wrote:Well, I liked the concept. But I felt like when the song picked up or got heavy, you used more stagnant scenes with a lack of movement which kinda detracted from the whole experience. If you used more transitions on certain parts, at least a dissolve, it would of flowed so much better. I liked the part before he said the word "Ashes" and the guy was reloading. That was nice. Just be wary of timing and flow. Big big ones. For me, the reason for that is, if I know the song and I know at the end the music gets really heavy and awesome, then I expect the video to do the same. So careful on scene selection! Solid job anyhow. I'll be looking for the next one of yours. (I'm sorry if I'm sounding like a douche or anything. I'm just trying to help.)

Thank you

(nope do not sound douche to me)

Replay Studios wrote:i like the idea a lot but it does feels rushed and rough, but keep it up ^^

okay... so you think i shot keep making videos that make you feel that thy are rushed and rough

wot a Weird thing to say

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