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Proscurecer
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Soldier

Post by Proscurecer » Sun Jul 08, 2012 1:37 pm

Video: Soldier (Preview)
Category: Action,Character Profile
Anime: Ghost in The Shell
Song: Rise
Artist: Origa
Creator's: Prohibitory

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Re: Soldier

Post by irriadin » Tue Jul 10, 2012 9:47 am

I'd stay away from using a song from the same anime source you're using for your video; it's very unimaginative. As for the video itself, I wasn't a fan of the character cut-outs. They didn't feel well integrated. Mood was pretty decent, though. Still, try working on the the sync and dynamic flow of your video a little more.

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Re: Soldier

Post by Proscurecer » Tue Jul 10, 2012 12:22 pm

Alright man & thanks and yeah i guess now that i see it the masking was a little unnecessary.
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Re: Soldier

Post by pan_dbgt01 » Wed Jul 11, 2012 4:04 pm

Not bad. I think you synched well to the music. I think matching music/source is alright at times. I loved His Wings.

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Re: Soldier

Post by Kevmaster » Wed Jul 11, 2012 4:46 pm

irriadin wrote:I'd stay away from using a song from the same anime source you're using for your video
I beg to differ :nose:

Going to download this video now.

EDIT: If this video was twice as long and didn't have the random masking which destroyed everything about the video I would have absolutely adored it. Don't add masking just for the sake of having masking in your video. It actually needs to serve a purpose. This is a perfect example of how random and unthoughtful effect work can absolutely crap a good video.

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Re: Soldier

Post by Proscurecer » Wed Jul 11, 2012 8:01 pm

pan_dbgt01 wrote:Not bad. I think you synched well to the music. I think matching music/source is alright at times. I loved His Wings.
Thank you
Kevmaster wrote:
irriadin wrote:I'd stay away from using a song from the same anime source you're using for your video
I beg to differ :nose:

Going to download this video now.

EDIT: If this video was twice as long and didn't have the random masking which destroyed everything about the video I would have absolutely adored it. Don't add masking just for the sake of having masking in your video. It actually needs to serve a purpose. This is a perfect example of how random and unthoughtful effect work can absolutely crap a good video.
Thanks for the feedback man. It was good criticism, constructive that is.
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