
This was my submission for Round 2 of The Quickening. If you're unfamiliar, we're randomly assigned a song and we have a week to edit. I was a bit sickly, so I really only used two days. The round ended and I passed, so I figured I should stop procrastinating and get a copy up on the Org.

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* That's what I called the characters while I was editing, since I didn't know their names. XD