Hey there! ^^
Overall I thought it was a simply-edited AMV like you said, but the song choice was good and the cuts you made were in time with the beat, which is always a good thing. The scenes you showed were meaningful to the context of the words in the song. For me, concept is more important than technical considerations, plus I'm not one to insist that effects be in a video for me to enjoy it, so I did like it and it's also a good start for a first AMV!
Some minor technical points - obviously windows movie maker doesn't track the source footage very well (I used to use this program *shudders* ) as is evident around the 2:53 mark on YouTube - see how the mouths are moving super-quick?
Generally, not a good idea to use footage with subs on it. Raws are the ones without subs, and just so you know, it's considered ethical that you purchase at least some of the DVDs from a legitimate source so the money is flowing back to the company.
Use the VidID tag above, and between the tags goes the number that's in the URL when you're looking at your actual video entry on the site. In your case, the number is 186278 and you don't have to use HTML - the tag does everything for you.
Here's some guides:
http://www.animemusicvideos.org/guides/ (don't mean to overwhelm you, but it's nice to have an idea - you might see something that pops out to you as a good idea

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The guides show how to use FTP to upload directly to animemusicvideos.org, which allow for anonymous quick comments and also your video to be rated. You used a direct link for some reason. (it's your choice - you might not want the video rated - standards can be high here! Don't get discouraged - keep doing what you enjoy and take advice if it makes sense to you

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Anyway, I did think that you captured the Naruto/Hinata moments well and matched to the song. And I really want to know how you got the "as seen on animemusicvideos.org" link on your YouTube vid!
