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Shoshinsa

Post by seasons » Wed Jan 25, 2012 1:23 pm

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Trying to evoke a mellow mood here but also with a forward-flowing feel.

There was a theme I wanted to repeat as well but that's hard to establish with such a short song.

I hope you'll give it a view. Thanks.

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Re: Shoshinsa

Post by Shin-AMV » Sat Jan 28, 2012 3:31 pm

It has a nice carthasism about it and the travelling/road motif going on was pretty nice. :up:
The flashes at the beginning felt unnecessary for beat sync, and the cuts between scenes would have worked on their own I thought, when they stopped around 19 it just felt a lot better.
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Re: Shoshinsa

Post by Chained(E)Studio » Sat Jan 28, 2012 11:44 pm

Shin-AMV wrote: The flashes at the beginning felt unnecessary for beat sync, and the cuts between scenes would have worked on their own I thought, when they stopped around 19 it just felt a lot better.
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Really enjoyed it. Really nostalgic type feeling I got while watching and listening to the music. =3
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Re: Shoshinsa

Post by seasons » Tue Jan 31, 2012 12:55 am

Thanks for your feedback. Means a lot to me.

I had second thoughts about the flashes myself for all sorts of reasons. I still like the way they look but I wonder if I was too set on leaving them in just because I'd finally figured out how to make them in the first place. Definitely the sort of thing I get tired of seeing in other videos, so of course I go and do it myself.

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Re: Shoshinsa

Post by gotegenks » Wed Feb 08, 2012 7:25 pm

i liked it a lot, very relaxing.
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Re: Shoshinsa

Post by Emong » Thu Feb 09, 2012 11:02 am

I liked the driving motif and it was actually original for an amv (at least that I know of...) but I kinda wish it really was just a motif rather than basically the whole content of the video. Perhaps you could have added more to the story?

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Re: Shoshinsa

Post by Kireblue » Sun Feb 12, 2012 2:06 am

This amv had a nice flow and did a good job at transitioning between the different series. I think that a little bit of internal and movement sync would have been a nice way to add in some excitement though.

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Re: Shoshinsa

Post by NotFound404 » Mon Feb 13, 2012 2:18 am

Very nice. I liked the way you used all the scenes, even if they are from different animes, they perfectly make a pair with the music and give the feeling that they're all looking for the same thing.
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