Ghost of a Soul (Evangelion 2.0 You Can (Not) Advance)

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Ghost of a Soul (Evangelion 2.0 You Can (Not) Advance)

Post by razzor16 » Wed Dec 28, 2011 12:02 am


This is my first AMV and it is a mix of footage from Evangelion 2.0, and Agathodaemons song Ghost of a Soul which I feel has a darker tone that seems fit the Evangelion series.
Please Let me know any kind of improvements I can make to this video so that I may further my knowledge in making AMV's.

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Re: Ghost of a Soul (Evangelion 2.0 You Can (Not) Advance)

Post by CodeZTM » Fri Dec 30, 2011 10:36 am

First AMV huh? Well welcome to a-m-v.org! I hope you stick around and enjoy the hobby!

The song fit the content, but I felt like there just wasn't enough "editing" in the video.

I felt like the scenes moved really quickly setting-wise. Such as moving from a very crey room, to the orange sky scene with Eva 1 fighting in berserk mode. I also feel like the music was largely ignored. :56 has a REALLY fast pace, but the AMV scenes you're using are the same speed/length as the ones when the song is slower. Try and made the pace of the music to get a better product.

This is a very handy guide that a lot of people find useful when first starting out. It's written by a great guy who knew his stuff. :) Make sure and read it all! And if you have any questions, please don't hesitate to make a thread or ask someone for help!

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