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How I feel

Post by kyle_m » Sun Jul 03, 2011 5:47 pm

Hi, this is my new vid. I've meant to add a few words more, but... damn it's 2:45 !

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Re: How I feel

Post by Cyrix » Wed Jul 06, 2011 1:34 am

You probably could have picked a better "poster" -^

It's all right, sort of slow and dull, but the clips match the mood of the music. I liked the intro, I think it draws you in (except the clips that have the titles in them, those are very distracting), but it loses steam when nothing significant ever starts happening. I was getting a little bored at the middle.

There's one clip about two thirds of the way through where the dark-haired girl is putting a cigarette in a statue's mouth, and she is (unintentionally?) perfectly lip-synched to the lyrics... this is probably the worst flaw in the video, it's a complete "wtf" moment that totally takes you out of the video.

Overall not too bad, I think I just would have liked it better if there was less walking and some more dramatic scenes.
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Re: How I feel

Post by Cyrix » Wed Jul 06, 2011 1:35 am

Sorry for double post, server glitch
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Re: How I feel

Post by kyle_m » Wed Jul 13, 2011 4:25 pm

wow hi man, thanx for feedback, i didnt mean to hit the floor or something but i'll tell ya...
Cyrix wrote:You probably could have picked a better "poster" -^
man its nina simone, its her voice) and she smokes!
Cyrix wrote:it loses steam
had not any. its kind of state of mind when you went thru and found no one out there. and 'new dawn' means 'nothing'. like this
Cyrix wrote:There's one clip about two thirds of the way through where the dark-haired girl is putting a cigarette in a statue's mouth, and she is (unintentionally?) perfectly lip-synched to the lyrics... this is probably the worst flaw in the video, it's a complete "wtf" moment that totally takes you out of the video.
well its metaphor. she had no one to address her words to, and share a weed, but to mr.woody only. self ironic

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