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guns showers and a bat

Post by blaksun » Thu Jun 23, 2011 1:27 pm

warning graphic violence
feedback and adhesives is always welcome
so i can make better amv :D
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Re: guns showers and a bat

Post by Kireblue » Thu Jun 23, 2011 10:52 pm

Let me just start off by saying that the Dokuro scenes really do not belong. In the beginning, it seemed like you were building some kind of story with the Black Blood Brothers scenes, but when you started throwing in unrelated Dokuro scenes, you kinda broke the mood and flow of the video. And then the Black Blood brother scenes that you used started to become random and unrelated to each other. So I think that the biggest flaw in the video is its that it needed more consistency in the way that it was edited and the scenes that you used.

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Re: guns showers and a bat

Post by blaksun » Fri Jun 24, 2011 12:29 pm

kireblue wrote:Let me just start off by saying that the Dokuro scenes really do not belong. In the beginning, it seemed like you were building some kind of story with the Black Blood Brothers scenes, but when you started throwing in unrelated Dokuro scenes, you kinda broke the mood and flow of the video. And then the Black Blood brother scenes that you used started to become random and unrelated to each other. So I think that the biggest flaw in the video is its that it needed more consistency in the way that it was edited and the scenes that you used.
I really appreciate (value) your opinions\feedback. and I will keep it in mind. thank you :up:
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Re: guns showers and a bat

Post by post-it » Sat Jun 25, 2011 5:10 pm

.. umm; not sure where this was going!

similar thoughts many times don't work `just because their "theme's" were the same.
-- true; love is love, death is death, but vampires are not blungering-distroyers!

Black Blood & HellSing might have worked .. but don't quote me on that.

2/5 because of the mismatched video's used.

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Re: guns showers and a bat

Post by blaksun » Mon Jun 27, 2011 10:24 am

post-it wrote:.. umm; not sure where this was going!

similar thoughts many times don't work `just because their "theme's" were the same.
-- true; love is love, death is death, but vampires are not blungering-distroyers!

Black Blood & HellSing might have worked .. but don't quote me on that.

2/5 because of the mismatched video's used.
Thank you, for you adhesives\feedback it is appreciate
Text endless companions so foe raid ones and even less that makes sense :)

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