AMV Treason
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ibabrak
- Joined: Sat Dec 18, 2010 4:43 am
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AMV Treason
Hi everyone,
I'm kind of new in making AMVs (I've made 6 so far), I will be glad if you give me any kind of advice, comment or even critique, if you find something wrong with this video.
I've made this AMV with made-up plot, hope you will like it.
Last edited by ibabrak on Fri Jan 07, 2011 6:09 am, edited 2 times in total.
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EkaCoralian
- Joined: Fri Nov 28, 2008 10:01 am
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- Location: Canada
Re: AMV Treason
You hit a lot of great beats! I would say that I found the font choice to be nice and bold, but the style didn't fit the dark mood of the song. Also sometimes what it said 'We have lost our family. But we live on with music': something like that. The 2 sentences just don't really corellate between each other to me.
But this was nice. Great song choice, as well.
But this was nice. Great song choice, as well.
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ibabrak
- Joined: Sat Dec 18, 2010 4:43 am
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Re: AMV Treason
Thanks for the comment, to be honest I spend a lot of time especially on those two sentences, but i coudn't come up with better alternate.
There's always a next time, hope it will be better
There's always a next time, hope it will be better