Did you slow down the song a little? It sounds a little off. The ending was just a LITTLE weirdly made. Finally, IT WAS TOO DAMN SHORT. I WANTED MOAR DAMNIT. the opening was a little slow here and there, but nothing too terrible. XD
But besides that, it was really well edited and had some GREAT scene transitions/selections. There was some lip flap here and there, and some of the opening text, which was a shame to see.
But definitely a GREAT first amv. I was really impressed. Oh, and you might want to check out our A/V guides. While the quality was great, it was a shame to see it in WMV. You'd probably get a much smaller filesize too.
Good job on a first.
4/5