Timeless bored me after 1:30. I really wanted to turn it off. Ok so I watched it until the end and it draged on and on and on and on... wow =/
Well ok it´s not my song so I give you 3.6 for it. The beginning with the guitar was nice. Reminded me of a rpg game =D
Efflorescent Dawn... well to be honest: I expected less.
The intro was imo smexy and a nice font =D Someone learned to use fractal noise, right? ;P
Ok it´s randomn, but it´s good randomn stuff that entertains and has a pretty nice flow. Uhm I see some stuff that would need some colour correction to make it a better overall, but yeah all in all it´s 4.75/5
Efflorescent Dawn & Timeless (AWA Pro/Expo Entries)
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Late post is laaaaaaaaaaate :XKristyrat wrote:Late post is laaaate :X
So yeah, finally the time to comment properly :
Efflorescent Pwn : You've definitely improved effects-wise, but as has been mentioned, the use of all these over-used, classic beautiful takes away from the soul of the video. In addition, though you really varied the segments alot, the editing just felt too... Square, almost like I could tell what was coming. The video's a nice foundation to build on, but don't forget what got you here : Original scene selection.
Mimeless : I liked the idea of the story, liked the combo you had, but all the fades drive me freaking CRAZY everytime I watch this video. It's annoying, it's repetitive, and it could be easily varied with some cross-dissolves or something. A fade was originally meant as a scene-ending transition, and a cross-dissolve as a scene-changing transition. Here, I didn't know what the hell was going on after a while. And then it was like happy ending, what? This may be just me, but I couldn't keep up.
Well, as Ben has said, I can't wait to see you try something different now
