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Re: [NCP] One

Post by Nya-chan Production » Thu May 13, 2010 3:33 am

EvaFan wrote:It was a clever idea but... I dont know I just had a hard time enjoying it. After a bit of switching my eyes around it just got annoying... I think I would have liked this alot more if you had just made a regular amv and incorporated the text into it differently or something :| . Creativity is fine but this feels forced IMO.

3/5
"people who don't know how to watch this video": +1
But yeah, prolly not your cup of tea ;x
Haze. wrote:Mkay finally got around to watching this.
That was quite enjoyable, :up: nice Nya.
And please no more hazing :( I had enough of that in school. :uhoh:
4/5
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Okay, no more hazing :uhoh:
Thankies :>
Kain-x-spirits wrote:I liked it.
And like can lead to like-like :ying:
Haeresis wrote:It was a pretty enjoyable video with a very interesting idea :up:.
Scene selection was just :ying:.
The only problem I had with it is that it's hard to watch 4 things at the same time.
Another +1 :>
Yeah, scene selection, go!
Kosmit wrote:There is clearly more than one. I feel cheated ;_;

On a more serious note, I really enjoyed watching this. Cool concept :up:
Thanks :up:
I like to cheat. My first vid was a cheat too. And the rest of my vids are as well ;D
Kevmaster wrote:I liked watching this.
I liked making this.
OtakuGray wrote:Love the Concept...although i thought it was gonna pull out and show more squares....
Nonetheless, it was definitely an interesting idea. :up:
Was the original idea but I met some technical and hardware limits D:
And thanks :up:
Tearx wrote:I was expecting something to burst out and more editing to start, but it never came.. x]
Hmm, wish there was more editing, but it is a nice little tribute to anime ^^
Is that an alien reference? ^^
Anyhow - it's more of sentimental, yeah, maybe a little "think about your life" stuff.
Animated wrote:Best Sentimental vid of the year. Although you didn't enter it as Sentimental.

I love you. <3
And like-like can lead to loooooooove <3
*goes to enter it as sentimental* - prolly forgot or wasn't completely sure about that category.
Pie Row Maniac wrote:The visual premise is interesting, but the execution is lacking.

Videos could stand to be at least this original. :up:
Ms. Lacking Execution is my second name - as stated, I cheat and often try to hide behind stuff :>
Thanks, I like to be original, though :up:
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Re: [NCP] One

Post by Kimberly » Sat May 15, 2010 11:16 pm

liked it lots 83
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Re: [NCP] One

Post by Aggressor » Sun May 16, 2010 2:11 am

Heartfelt. Not many AMVs can make me lost in thoughts and change my mood to that extent. Definitely one of your best, imo.
If I was to complain about something, it'd be 4-screen approach. Yes, I know how to watch it (you should probably write a manual in the description), but still I think one screen and many alternating scenes would be better. And also "One fight" was unnecessarily funny.
Those weren't really drawbacks, just your own view, so 5/5 and "great job!" from me.

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Re: [NCP] One

Post by mirkosp » Sun May 16, 2010 2:17 am

What I told you when betaing, aka the screens that you can see at the left and bottom sides of the video are annoying to me because they move the 4 screens aways from the perfect center. Also, watching again, reading "one *something*" and seeing it happen in multiple screens (even all the 3 other screens in some points) felt a bit jarring... it's like "is it really one if she's showing it happen in 2/3 different situations?" :uhoh:
/nitpicks
Those things said, the multiple-screen approach was fine by me, and this was certainly an interesting AMV. 4.5/5 :)
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Re: [NCP] One

Post by Nya-chan Production » Sun May 16, 2010 6:30 am

Kimberly wrote:liked it lots 83
B... but... I was born in 86 D:
Aggressor wrote:Heartfelt. Not many AMVs can make me lost in thoughts and change my mood to that extent. Definitely one of your best, imo.
If I was to complain about something, it'd be 4-screen approach. Yes, I know how to watch it (you should probably write a manual in the description), but still I think one screen and many alternating scenes would be better. And also "One fight" was unnecessarily funny.
Those weren't really drawbacks, just your own view, so 5/5 and "great job!" from me.
Thanks, I prolly should... or just tease people with it and complain they can't watch stuff ;D
Thanks for the OP too... 2 more and it might show in Top 100 ^^
mirkosp wrote:What I told you when betaing, aka the screens that you can see at the left and bottom sides of the video are annoying to me because they move the 4 screens aways from the perfect center. Also, watching again, reading "one *something*" and seeing it happen in multiple screens (even all the 3 other screens in some points) felt a bit jarring... it's like "is it really one if she's showing it happen in 2/3 different situations?" :uhoh:
/nitpicks
Those things said, the multiple-screen approach was fine by me, and this was certainly an interesting AMV. 4.5/5 :)
It's one, because every and each of those scenes is special and original ;x
Thanks for the betaing and watching yet again ;D
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Re: [NCP] One

Post by jforce123 » Sun May 16, 2010 10:31 am

Despite seeing people say how original it was in the posts I was still impressed by the concept you went for in this video. but i have to agree with mirko about the squares being off center, and overall I believe that the video had no real climax to it and thats a shame because it keeps this from being a heavily rewatchable video to me. In the end its one interesting concept executed throughout the entire video, but its done well enough to keep me interested. 4/5

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Re: [NCP] One

Post by Kenzichu » Tue May 18, 2010 1:12 am

I loved this. It's inspirational!

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Re: [NCP] One

Post by BurningLeaves » Tue May 18, 2010 3:27 am

Hmm I think I liked this. For half of the video I was confused and trying to jump ahead and figure out what all these had in common. The video seemed like it was really building up to something, like the boxes were going to go away and you'd full screen out with a bang on whatever you were going to bang with.. but there was no bang at the end more of a sizzle and a.. oh? well okay then.. I liked the 4 boxes and I like the concept of splitting it up with the words on the different screens and using the words on there to help your sync. I did like that you changed the number/order of the boxes around so it wasn't always the same. I dunno, I think I would have liked this more if it told an actual story... Which granted would have been a completely different video than the one you made so saying it should just be a different video really isn't fair to you. But if it had been a romance vid or something with a story of two people to follow along with a nice (take away the boxes and boom full screen) climax I think I would have gotten into it alot more than a
Spoiler :
lesson about life which no offense to you but just seemed a bit pretentious to me, but then again I tend to think most things that try and sum up life are pretentious so it could just be me
But all in all I do like that you did something original and it wasn't a bad idea. I think it could have been a bit better in my opinion but certainly was not bad.

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Re: [NCP] One

Post by kickass331 » Tue May 18, 2010 4:01 am

nya, make an action video, or I will make you make one. I am tired of talking to some person that doesn't believe entertainment should be entertaining. Now get busy!
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Re: [NCP] One

Post by Nya-chan Production » Tue May 18, 2010 7:00 am

Kenzichu wrote:I loved this. It's inspirational!
Thanks, Kenzi!
BurningLeaves wrote:Hmm I think I liked this. For half of the video I was confused and trying to jump ahead and figure out what all these had in common. The video seemed like it was really building up to something, like the boxes were going to go away and you'd full screen out with a bang on whatever you were going to bang with.. but there was no bang at the end more of a sizzle and a.. oh? well okay then.. I liked the 4 boxes and I like the concept of splitting it up with the words on the different screens and using the words on there to help your sync. I did like that you changed the number/order of the boxes around so it wasn't always the same. I dunno, I think I would have liked this more if it told an actual story... Which granted would have been a completely different video than the one you made so saying it should just be a different video really isn't fair to you. But if it had been a romance vid or something with a story of two people to follow along with a nice (take away the boxes and boom full screen) climax I think I would have gotten into it alot more than a
Spoiler :
lesson about life which no offense to you but just seemed a bit pretentious to me, but then again I tend to think most things that try and sum up life are pretentious so it could just be me
But all in all I do like that you did something original and it wasn't a bad idea. I think it could have been a bit better in my opinion but certainly was not bad.
ZOMG long text! Thanks for the insight, yeah, sometimes I hate those lessons too, but we have to do them sometimes, right? Again, thanks a lot ^^
kickass331 wrote:nya, make an action video, or I will make you make one. I am tired of talking to some person that doesn't believe entertainment should be entertaining. Now get busy!
I don't make AMVs for you, I am making them for people who can think about what they say.
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