The focus on what I was trying to do was actually a two-sided affair: it was meant to be with the idea of Renji wanting to fix Chihiro, but in the process they end up fixing each other, hence why I tried to do what I did. Reading into what you suggested however, your suggestion might have been a bit more straightforward in terms of plot...so if I do look to revisit this one later on, I will take it into consideration.
Also Koop, did you look at the first link, the second link, or both? The second link in the OP is the one that I had redone to try to address some of the issues brought up in here after I placed the first one on here.
Thanks for your comments ppl, I really do appreciate it
