Obviously others have a diffrent sense of humour, I mean really it is a VERRY steryotype thing

I mean really what Nailz wrote was a bit harsh... Alow worms to rape you?
But I'm downloading the AMV as we speak so I can actully comment on it

Ok firstly you should have cut your losses and just finished when the song finished, the ending bit REALLY ruins it.
Its not a bad amv, not a real good one either (sorry) but not bad.
The vocals from the show in the middle of the amv I don't think go well (I have only really ever seen one AMV were that was used well, Akimbo's Batman beyond one)
Also I know its kind of shallow but I am gunna have to bring up the scourse material. Sorry but DBZ amv's just RARLEY work. I think the main thing is you really should have chosen footage from the movies not the actuall show (or atleast later in the show) cause the fact that the animation in most of DBZ sucks hard really doesn't help your cause.
That and it brings to mind how did Freeza make his metal hand bleed? That just doesnt make anysense.
But yeah the editing on the most part isn't bad, could use some improvement in timing etc but its not bad by any means. If you
A, used better footage (Not early DBZ footage) and either stopped using the sounds from the show (wich wasn't all bad, the bit with Trunks screaming apart from changing pitch when the scene cut actully worked well) or limited it it would be better.
Hope that helps.