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Taite
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Re: Live

Post by Taite » Thu Sep 03, 2009 2:58 pm

Sephirothishere wrote:I've watched this for emotional impact, just like SJCorrectet refered, so i'm kindda satistied, however, the editing seemed kindda fast and rough at a bunch of parts, which cancels some of the extra impact it could have had for me.
Scene selection was overall pretty nice tho :P
I agree.
I think the speed at which the clips changed was too fast.

Also, the constant use of crossfades kinda mushed everything together a little too much (if you know what I mean o_O) and it would be better off with hard cuts, which would add more impact and a better flow. Too much anime made for less emotional impact, but overall, I think the mood was set and was rather nice.


During the chorus was the best part. The clips were allowed more space, which was kinda weird. During the slower parts of the song, you had them going fast, and during the chorus, you had it down pat. Still a little too much crossfading during the chorus.

I think the main problem was all of the syncing to the beat and words being sung.

Here's some chunks of the video I went through:

(the beginning of the video)00:10 - 00:21 - too much beat sync. But the clip choice was really nice.
00:21 - 00:26 the sync was a little messy.
00:27 - 00:34 good good.
00:35 - 00:47 a little too much syncing to the words that are being sung.
00:47 - 00:56 good good. But that last clip of Naruto where it showed all of the people standing there was uneeded, and corrupted the nice sync you had going.
1:00 - 1:26 was the first chorus. Well done. This is what made me keep watching, because from here everything got much better.
2:24 - 2:36 was a section where it was done rather well though. And from 2:36 - 3:01, it was on and off, but when it got more upbeat, it got better.
3:01 - 3:40 was my favorite part of all. Just very well done. Nice atmosphere, great sync.
3:40 - End was decent. Still a little too much crossfading, and too many unneeded clip changes, but still decent.

The clip choice was real nice and kept a nice atmosphere. It seems you had a lot of good clips to work with and a lot you wanted in there, but in the end some have to be sacrificed to keep a good sync.
I love this version of the song as well :up:

Overall, a really nice video.
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Re: Live

Post by Fizziks » Sat Sep 05, 2009 3:33 pm

The crossfades did feel a little overused (although this is just my personal preference, since I like using hard cuts more), but you got the mood down nicely, and overall I thought you did a good job on this AMV. Nice work! :up:
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Re: Live

Post by Animated » Sun Sep 06, 2009 1:20 pm

Taite wrote:
Sephirothishere wrote:Also, the constant use of crossfades kinda mushed everything together a little too much (if you know what I mean o_O) and it would be better off with hard cuts, which would add more impact and a better flow. Too much anime made for less emotional impact, but overall, I think the mood was set and was rather nice.
Fizziks wrote:The crossfades did feel a little overused (although this is just my personal preference, since I like using hard cuts more), but you got the mood down nicely, and overall I thought you did a good job on this AMV. Nice work! :up:
Well, ok, i overdid it with the crossfades, i admit it :mrgreen: Anyway, since you agree it didn't affect the atmosphere, i believe we're ok... heh. Glad you both liked it. :D
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Re: Live

Post by yumi+chan » Sun Sep 06, 2009 3:41 pm

I like the video, it has a really nice atmosphere and is very emotional :) And I think the editing is pretty nice, too, the crossfades didn't bother me ;)

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Re: Live

Post by Bauzi » Fri Sep 11, 2009 11:55 am

I think this video needs more attention. Though there are some aspects that I disagree with, but I think this is a very good composed multi anime video.

Please give it a chance guys. It was really enjoyable.
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Re: Live

Post by Megamom » Fri Sep 11, 2009 12:14 pm

Bauzi wrote:I think this video needs more attention. Though there are some aspects that I disagree with, but I think this is a very good composed multi anime video.

Please give it a chance guys. It was really enjoyable.
I totally agree with you Bauzi, this AMV is really amazing, I filled my heart!

5/5 :up:
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Re: Live

Post by gotenks794 » Fri Sep 11, 2009 4:53 pm

I must agree that it kind of seemed like a hodge podge of sources... It kinda took away from my overall enjoyment.
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Re: Live

Post by MimS » Sat Sep 12, 2009 4:05 am

+ for:
The editing
The pace
The atmosphere
Mixing sources without problem

- for:
The lyrics of the song

4/5
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I love this one.

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Other -:
WTF have you done with the scenes of Haruhi child?
I have 2 black fonts different of the screen, that's ugly
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Re: Live

Post by Animated » Sun Sep 13, 2009 9:58 am

yumi+chan wrote:I like the video, it has a really nice atmosphere and is very emotional :) And I think the editing is pretty nice, too, the crossfades didn't bother me ;)
Nice to hear that. Thanks :)
Megamom wrote:
Bauzi wrote:I think this video needs more attention. Though there are some aspects that I disagree with, but I think this is a very good composed multi anime video.

Please give it a chance guys. It was really enjoyable.
I totally agree with you Bauzi, this AMV is really amazing, I filled my heart!

5/5 :up:
Bauzi, Megamom... thanks guys, you totally made my day. I owe you some cookies. :up:
~MimS~ wrote:+ for:
The editing
The pace
The atmosphere
Mixing sources without problem

- for:
The lyrics of the song

4/5
:up:
I love this one.

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Other -:
WTF have you done with the scenes of Haruhi child?
I have 2 black fonts different of the screen, that's ugly
Danke danke :D As for the lyrics of the song... it's not my fault :P And about that awful scene... oh shit. Seems that i'll have to hire more beta testers someday.
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Re: Live

Post by Mamo! » Sun Sep 13, 2009 10:33 am

Nice :3

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