Heh, well I like the song.
As for the video, I wasn't feeling it.
Not a bad attempt though.
Airplanes
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Pwolf
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Re: Airplanes
I thought the chorus was strong but the other parts of the videos felt kinda random. The editing was good, nice flow but the scenes just didn't connect IMO.
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Slash
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Re: Airplanes
Yeah, the chorus was definitely the best part of the video, but it was a overall good watch 
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Knowname
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Re: Airplanes
Fun song! Could really worked just felt too random for a story based amv. Especially towards the end. I believe if you want to make a dramatic event you need to make the scene appear JUST before it is specified with the song, not when it is specified. It's best to LEAD the viewer into it, IMHO. Since it appeared just at the time the song talks about phone calls or night sky it just felt random (IMO the dramatic moment before it was given too much screen-time)... to me. note: mixing this kind of concept with action oriented syncing is very hard 
ie you probly don't want a story in your action, it leads to clips that are just too long! also the syncing can prove tricky for things to make sense . But beside that I thought you made a nice, by the book, action amv. 3/ 5
ie you probly don't want a story in your action, it leads to clips that are just too long! also the syncing can prove tricky for things to make sense . But beside that I thought you made a nice, by the book, action amv. 3/ 5If you do not think so... you will DIE
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gotegenks
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Re: Airplanes
...this is story based?Knowname wrote:Fun song! Could really worked just felt too random for a story based amv.
