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Re: When September Ends

Post by ExSphere » Sun May 23, 2010 1:02 pm

Orphan frame at the very beginning, really bad obvious slow downs, typography was good at times, Excellent job with mamimi fading away, wait wha? only 1:20 =| Not to mention you should have faded the end of the song longer. It felt too abrupt. This video should have been longer with less text and more focus on naota.

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Re: When September Ends

Post by OtakuGray » Sun May 23, 2010 7:26 pm

Orphan frame at the very beginning
Whats that D:?
really bad obvious slow downs
Alright, ill work on that.
typography was good at times, Excellent job with mamimi fading away
Thanks!
This video should have been longer.
its a mini. I didnt want too extend it to a full because i felt like it had pretty much got the full message out by by that point.
with less text and more focus on naota.
Well that would have defeated the entire purpose of the video. :uhoh: The point of the video was to explain that without mamimi or haruko, something felt missing.
godix wrote:Like this one amv. It was all like woosh, zoom with effects. And I was all like whoa awesome. Then that guitar thingies popped up and went dun dun DUN dun then those box thingies went zooming by and twirling around and shit. Oh god, then the hexagons popped up and I was like 'I just got a stiffie'. Then there was the circle with those thingies going around and I blew my load.
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Re: When September Ends

Post by LeX » Thu May 27, 2010 12:37 pm

The Font was unneeded.
I didn't liked how you used the shakes and at some parts the ''Black and White'' sux.
otherwise aight!

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Re: When September Ends

Post by gotegenks » Thu May 27, 2010 5:33 pm

ExSphere wrote:Orphan frame at the very beginning, really bad obvious slow downs, typography was good at times, Excellent job with mamimi fading away, wait wha? only 1:20 =| Not to mention you should have faded the end of the song longer. It felt too abrupt. This video should have been longer with less text and more focus on naota.
"-completely agrees with ExSphere-"
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Re: When September Ends

Post by Nya-chan Production » Thu May 27, 2010 5:55 pm

orphan frame = one frame left from some of the scenes on the sides of a cut. Like this:

//scene 1//1 frame from scene that followed in the original footage after scene 1 or before scene 2//scene2//

Yes, it can be noticed and someone usually will ;x
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Re: When September Ends

Post by OtakuGray » Thu May 27, 2010 7:40 pm

Nya-chan Production wrote:orphan frame = one frame left from some of the scenes on the sides of a cut. Like this:

//scene 1//1 frame from scene that followed in the original footage after scene 1 or before scene 2//scene2//

Yes, it can be noticed and someone usually will ;x
So its frame blending? o_O
godix wrote:Like this one amv. It was all like woosh, zoom with effects. And I was all like whoa awesome. Then that guitar thingies popped up and went dun dun DUN dun then those box thingies went zooming by and twirling around and shit. Oh god, then the hexagons popped up and I was like 'I just got a stiffie'. Then there was the circle with those thingies going around and I blew my load.
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Re: When September Ends

Post by Enigma » Thu May 27, 2010 7:42 pm

OtakuGray wrote:
Nya-chan Production wrote:orphan frame = one frame left from some of the scenes on the sides of a cut. Like this:

//scene 1//1 frame from scene that followed in the original footage after scene 1 or before scene 2//scene2//

Yes, it can be noticed and someone usually will ;x
So its frame blending? o_O
More like a random frame appearing where and when its not meant to appear

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Re: When September Ends

Post by OtakuGray » Thu May 27, 2010 7:49 pm

oh damnit i hate that ;__; is that a problem with the clips or the amv render?
godix wrote:Like this one amv. It was all like woosh, zoom with effects. And I was all like whoa awesome. Then that guitar thingies popped up and went dun dun DUN dun then those box thingies went zooming by and twirling around and shit. Oh god, then the hexagons popped up and I was like 'I just got a stiffie'. Then there was the circle with those thingies going around and I blew my load.
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Re: When September Ends

Post by Enigma » Thu May 27, 2010 7:57 pm

Most of the time it's on how your footage is encoded.

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Re: When September Ends

Post by Nya-chan Production » Thu May 27, 2010 8:04 pm

There are two options how this appears.

One is simple - you just go one frame over the cut and don't realize or notice it.
The other one is different - you screw up with fps count somewhere or the creators did (cut in half of frame). Then you have a bit of frame different but the editor shows its beginning and you don't see it unless you zoom close enough.

The best way to remove this is to have lots of beta-testers or to re-watch the video a few times before releasing it ;x
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