Soukou no Strain - Sara

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Soukou no Strain - Sara

Post by Seska1973 » Sun Dec 03, 2006 2:34 pm

Hello, everyone. I'm new here to this Forum. And i wanna share my AMV with you all.

First the Link: Click me!!

Well, what you think all?. Please fell free to answer with your comments. Thanks

Mfg,
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Post by Seska1973 » Mon Dec 04, 2006 1:38 pm

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Post by Seska1973 » Mon Dec 04, 2006 1:38 pm

dont get me wrong, i'm no member of the Subgroup what i used to build this AMV. But, i asked them in case .I just dont have a RAW Source for doing this.

And i know, the others here are more Upperclass. But, littel Feedback dosent hurt :)

Mfg,
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p.s. if you wanna see more of my works, try searching in youtube (2 Simouns AMVs)

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Post by Fizziks » Mon Dec 04, 2006 9:39 pm

Well, I watched you're video, and here are a few comments:

- The video quality on this AMV was actually pretty good, so I'll give you points for that
- There are very few subtitles in this video, however my preference is for there to be no random subtitles, unless they really serve a purpose
- In terms of editing, considering the song you're using, I would have probably used more quick cuts and fast edits. This is to pick up the overall pace of the video to match the song. Note, this is just my preference.

Overall, it was okay, so I'll give you a 3/5.

Keep at it, I'm sure you'll improve.
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Post by Scintilla » Mon Dec 04, 2006 9:47 pm

And for those who don't want to be taken to the local download page immediately, the video's profile page is <a href="http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... 1">here</a>.
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Post by Seska1973 » Tue Dec 05, 2006 11:21 am

Fizziks wrote:- The video quality on this AMV was actually pretty good, so I'll give you points for that
Thanks, on that. But actually it was raw taken from the Subbed anime :)
and my editor programm has some Anti-flicker filter plugin.
- There are very few subtitles in this video, however my preference is for there to be no random subtitles, unless they really serve a purpose
I was planing with these. Because to bring the "Story" or in other words the reason behind her. She is fighting against her brother (in short terms)
- In terms of editing, considering the song you're using, I would have probably used more quick cuts and fast edits. This is to pick up the overall pace of the video to match the song. Note, this is just my preference.
quick cuts? Something like this [funny textfilter :). insert you know what tube i mean)
but i'm more a person how likes emotions

(to Admin/Mod: I use this links only to explain myself. Please let them stay online. Thanks)
Keep at it, I'm sure you'll improve.
Domo arigato

I try it :)
But to doing this, i need Feedbacks... :)

Mfg,
Seska1973

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