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Nurikomaniac
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My Very First AMV!!!

Post by Nurikomaniac » Wed Nov 15, 2006 2:36 pm

Is the any Fushigi Yuugi fans out there? I hope so... I just did my very first amv and it is starring Nuriko (hence my name Nurikomaniac) from Fushigi Yuugi. This is about Nuriko's last battle and shows a some romance between Nuriko and Miaka. This is my first amv so honest and tactful comments are more than welcome. Please view and leave an opinion. Oh yeah, if ya leave me an opinion, I'll watch one of your vids and leave an opinion for you as well. Thanks!

:arrow: http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=132947

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BauziOLD
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Post by BauziOLD » Thu Nov 16, 2006 6:23 am

I´ll give you a change.
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Post by BauziOLD » Thu Nov 16, 2006 4:37 pm

And so I gave your amv a chance:

First of all it was ok for your first amv. I saw much more, that were
not so good, but there is still a lot of critic. This is an honest
comment, so be happy about it. You will learn to use them for improvement.

-Video Quality:
It sucks... Yes it sucks and .wmv in general. Use next time please .avi
with XviD. Have a look at the site guides please.
Good point: No subtitles at all.

-Editing:
Also a lot to improve here. OK you synced a few part, but not enought.
Some scences were to long and there where some syncs, where I thought,
that they are more luck, than real skill or sync. Also there was not
enought power behind the scences you used. I was missing speed and
more action. OK it was a character profil and maybe you don´t have enought
scence, but there should be more effort. The guides are also a help
at this point.
Would I really liked was, that you picked out the snowing scence. That
was good!

-Originality:
The song is over used in my eyes and also there would be better songs
for this character profil. The scences didn´t really worked with the
song in specially the chours. Sry.


I gave you only 1 star, because I missed a lot of things. I think, that
you can get much more better things up with more skill and effort.
Just keep editing up!

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