My third amv 50 seconds long

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My third amv 50 seconds long

Post by Black/gray lightning » Sat Aug 19, 2006 1:40 pm

Anime: Bleach

Song: Vegeta final flash

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Post by CodeZTM » Sat Aug 19, 2006 3:22 pm

For a crossover/voiceover, you did a decent job, but left a cliffhanger with lame text.

No. 1 - Some lip sync seemed awkward... Minus One

No. 2 - That ending with the text was annoying. You should have finished the AMV with something different... Minus One

Other than that, it was pretty good. 3/5
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