Ok so heres the link to my second amv ive ever done...can u tell me whhat u think?
http://youtube.com/watch?v=voMce0NSZUg
DBZ Super Android 13
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linkenballz
- Joined: Thu Jul 27, 2006 11:29 am
I watched both your videos and instead of being negative Im just going to tell you what I think you should try to improve upon.
1. Make story boards, and make a flow for your videos from point a to point b. instead of random fight scene. ZOMG I ran out of footage ZOMG I can use the same scene again and no one will notice the difference.
2. Try to keep an theme through out the video and keep to a certian source so its not like and for no reason heres a monkey grabbing bulmas breast
3. Check the listings, Im sure both of your videos have already been done, why becuase most people start out doing dbz videos they either get good and move on to a new anime or continue to fail. and as you can tell my sn is a farce on the over use of linken park and dbz
4. Work on encoding, youtube isnt the greatest i realize but watching your videos took me back to the days when i was 11 and watching the movies in real player. but read the guides and if you intend to keep making amvs you will have to get really good at encoding becuase you will want to take these to cons and they are all shown on big screens and they will turn away your video in a heartbeat.
hearts and kisses
- Kojima-Naked
1. Make story boards, and make a flow for your videos from point a to point b. instead of random fight scene. ZOMG I ran out of footage ZOMG I can use the same scene again and no one will notice the difference.
2. Try to keep an theme through out the video and keep to a certian source so its not like and for no reason heres a monkey grabbing bulmas breast
3. Check the listings, Im sure both of your videos have already been done, why becuase most people start out doing dbz videos they either get good and move on to a new anime or continue to fail. and as you can tell my sn is a farce on the over use of linken park and dbz
4. Work on encoding, youtube isnt the greatest i realize but watching your videos took me back to the days when i was 11 and watching the movies in real player. but read the guides and if you intend to keep making amvs you will have to get really good at encoding becuase you will want to take these to cons and they are all shown on big screens and they will turn away your video in a heartbeat.
hearts and kisses
- Kojima-Naked
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Noojiko
- Joined: Tue Mar 07, 2006 7:08 pm
I can't really say much since I just started making AMVs too but I suggest better timing. Also the use of a razor tool and stretch tool can REALLY help. And there was that one LONG scene with goku powered up which was there twice... and the lip syncing... well... you don't stop lip syncing in the middle of a line and not change the scene. It just looks.... wrong?
But anyways, nice try and I suggest (From a noob to another) to stay clear of DBZ, Linkin Park, Evanescence, Naruto, Inuyasha, Bleach, Sailor Moon, and all those large name animes which have like 3billion AMVs of them already.
But anyways, nice try and I suggest (From a noob to another) to stay clear of DBZ, Linkin Park, Evanescence, Naruto, Inuyasha, Bleach, Sailor Moon, and all those large name animes which have like 3billion AMVs of them already.
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linkenballz
- Joined: Thu Jul 27, 2006 11:29 am
Hey, Sailor moon is still the shit but yea its a little over doneNoojiko wrote:I can't really say much since I just started making AMVs too but I suggest better timing. Also the use of a razor tool and stretch tool can REALLY help. And there was that one LONG scene with goku powered up which was there twice... and the lip syncing... well... you don't stop lip syncing in the middle of a line and not change the scene. It just looks.... wrong?
But anyways, nice try and I suggest (From a noob to another) to stay clear of DBZ, Linkin Park, Evanescence, Naruto, Inuyasha, Bleach, Sailor Moon, and all those large name animes which have like 3billion AMVs of them already.