Naruto - Linkin Park - In The End

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Naruto - Linkin Park - In The End

Post by V13tB0i » Thu Jul 28, 2005 1:36 pm

Welps, my first Naruto music video ever created. I hope you guys enjoy, cause I worked hard.

Link : [url=http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=82453][Click Away!][/url
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Post by V13tB0i » Thu Jul 28, 2005 1:37 pm

It would be really nice... if I could re-edit my posts.

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Post by Melanchthon » Thu Jul 28, 2005 3:23 pm

V13tB0i wrote:It would be really nice... if I could re-edit my posts.
It would be really nice... if you provided a link to the video in question.
It would be really nice... if your sig didn't break the tables.
It would be really nice... if your sig didn't break the forum rules.
It would be really nice... if you hadn't used one of the most over-used animes on the org.
It would be really nice... if you hadn't used the most over-used song on the org.
It would be really nice... if after having combined Naruto and In The End, you provided in your video information some kind of reason I should download this beside morbid curiosity.

But we can't have everything, can we? And I'm feeling curious today.

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Post by Unlimited Rice » Thu Jul 28, 2005 3:31 pm

Melanchthon wrote:
V13tB0i wrote:It would be really nice... if I could re-edit my posts.
1.It would be really nice... if you provided a link to the video in question.
2.It would be really nice... if your sig didn't break the tables.
3.It would be really nice... if your sig didn't break the forum rules.
4..It would be really nice... if you hadn't used one of the most over-used animes on the org.
5.It would be really nice... if you hadn't used the most over-used song on the org.
6.It would be really nice... if after having combined Naruto and In The End, you provided in your video information some kind of reason I should download this beside morbid curiosity.

But we can't have everything, can we? And I'm feeling curious today.
1.Link: http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=82453

2. Those aren't in his sig.. those are screenshots he posted of his amv (he did the same thing over here)

3. Same as 2.

4-6: oh well..

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Post by Knowname » Thu Jul 28, 2005 3:44 pm

:lol: this song is legendary. LP should demand royaltys.... then maybe it'll stop.

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Post by Melanchthon » Thu Jul 28, 2005 4:13 pm

TheUnlimited wrote:2. Those aren't in his sig.. those are screenshots he posted of his amv (he did the same thing over here)

3. Same as 2.
Oops. My bad. I'm feeling rather pissy and headachey today for some reason. I did get the link, btw. It's no biggie to click on the 'profile link' box below, but it's still kind of annoying. Okay then, the vid itself.

Bad:

DivX logos. Subtitles.
See 4-6. If you're making videos purely for your own enjoyment, then fine, but as you're putting them here on the org and announcing them then I presume you want to get them seen and noticed. Naruto + Linkin Park isn't going to do you much good here, and neither is apparently not caring enough about your video to put something on the info page. No matter how short and easy the editing process was, it's far less trouble to just write a few sentences (Yes, this is one of my pet peeves).
Do you really need credits at both ends of the vid? :?
Orphan frames.

Good:

Quality's good and the file's small.
Timing's generally solid.

Stuff I noticed first time round:

It's strange to see Sasuke lip-synching only three-quarters of a line.
Cheesy flame transition with the photo.
Some major beats missed. The vid seems to be synched to the lyrics a line at a time to the exclusion of most other things.
~2.56: Now that was cool. Not only was the guy moving in time to the music, but the effects matched the beats.

General (ignoring how often this combination has been used. I've said enough):

It's alright for a first video, but as an action vid it falls down due to the extremely slow cuts. Thare are times when you spend an entire line on the same shot, and sometimes it's just a close up of someone's face. I noticed a few effects here and there... some black flashes (don't think about that) and some still shots during the soft part of the song. Those are pretty useful for breaking up the footage, so it'd be a good idea to experiment with those, as well as making the cuts faster.

This is 100% purely my opinion here (as always...), but the In The End's lyrics are so generic that there's no point in synching to them beyond picking a vaguely appropriate scene. There's some nice music behind the angsty lyrics, and it's a good song to make AMVs to. Just cause it's overused, doesn't mean it sucks. :wink:

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Post by V13tB0i » Thu Jul 28, 2005 11:07 pm

Woah, thanks for the big post. I mean it, next time I will correct my mistakes. Now that you said that, I can be more cautious on my videos.

p.s

I have the 720x480 file, and the quality is 2x better, but it's like 300k. I don't want to take up all the bandwith on this website...

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Post by V13tB0i » Thu Jul 28, 2005 11:20 pm

Do me a favor, tell me what you think about my other music video.

Rurouni Kenshin - Evanescence - Everybodys Fool

p.s

Sorry for the tripple posts though, I would fix the image sizes and everything if I could edit my posts.

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Post by spacekase » Fri Jul 29, 2005 8:55 am

Arcane Azmadi wrote:
V13tB0i wrote: Quit critisizing my posts if you don't even know how it's like yet. Haven't you ever heard to not "Judge a book by it's cover"?
Maybe you're new here, but you apparently have no idea about exactly how unoriginal your idea actually is. The only idea with less originality than that is 'Dragonball Z - In The End', which is so unoriginal it wouldn't even attract a few pithy remarks. I'm sorry, but he's pretty much right- no-one really cares about In The End AMVs anymore, and Naruto AMVs of ANY kind need to be really exceptional to attract any praise.
Is it possible for anyone to announce their first AMV and NOT get answers like this? If you're going to spend time typing a post like that how about you throw in a few EDITING pointers in as well. Can't we all just get along? :)
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Post by Niotex » Fri Jul 29, 2005 9:04 am

easy guys dont go all flame on this guy... jzs we all started somewhere didnt we? now put a sock in it bitches! :evil:

ill check out your vid and leave a op on it seeing as im in a good mode today... but i can tell you before hand that this is not gonna go down well on the originality grade as this has prob bin done 100 if not up to a 1000 times... just a warning not a flame.

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