World So Cold, not my first amv, just first upload.

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World So Cold, not my first amv, just first upload.

Post by Unbornjester » Mon Mar 14, 2005 9:48 pm

please check it out and let me know what you think... anything.. good, bad, ugly... it's cool... if good, let me know what so i can do more of it.. and if bad.
same but i'll try not to anymore... so yeah, check it out... at least for the music.. n.n

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Post by SSJVegita0609 » Tue Mar 15, 2005 12:20 am

Given that I love the song, I decided to get this despite the fact that it's a 9 meg WMV. Now, it seems like you're just really getting started at the AMV thing so I'll try to be constructive. In terms of content, concept, and scene selection the video is fine, you manage to create an atomsphere and that's definitely a plus. However, in just about all technical senses, this video is lacking. Your cuts are very long, which leaves much of the music feeling ignored, making the vid seem a bit uninteresting. Your visual quality also could benefit from a major tune up. It looks like you may have downloaded the cinematics from the game instead of capturing yourself. I'd recommend reading the guides on this site to help fix that problem. Also, and I know you didn't have much to work with, but there were some repeated scenes, which furthured the synch problems I was referring to earlier.

All in all, I've seen FAR worse starts in terms of videos, and encourage you to work hard to improve on your next work. Given that you seemed to have put some thought into the creation of this, based on the specific scenes you chose, I think we can hope to see some good stuff from you in the future. :wink:
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Post by Voices_Of_Ryan » Tue Mar 15, 2005 12:45 am

SSJVegita0609 wrote:Given that you seemed to have put some thought into the creation of this, based on the specific scenes you chose, I think we can hope to see some good stuff from you in the future. :wink:
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Post by Unbornjester » Thu Mar 17, 2005 3:02 am

thanks, i know the videos ended up being a little bad quality... but i did get it striaght from the game disc, the computer version.. i just think i messed up on the compression somewhere.. x.x i'll try to fix it on my next amv
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