Yeah, last time i'm plugging this video but um yeah as mentioned before, it's a character profile of Ken here's the link
http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=63885
First AMV, need feedback "Ken's Story"
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Zaphod_Beeblebrox
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ok, feedback:
this vid was quite poor really, the timing was virtually non-existent, the video quality was poor and you repeated a few scenes, you missed all the major timings (drum beats, guitar parts etc...) from what ican remember, you only hit one cymbal crash accurately.
on the plus side, your overall idea was quite good, if you improved the editing it could be a good video, but at this point in time you lack the skills to make it so.
this vid was quite poor really, the timing was virtually non-existent, the video quality was poor and you repeated a few scenes, you missed all the major timings (drum beats, guitar parts etc...) from what ican remember, you only hit one cymbal crash accurately.
on the plus side, your overall idea was quite good, if you improved the editing it could be a good video, but at this point in time you lack the skills to make it so.
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Scandia
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Daio Kaji
- Joined: Thu Dec 12, 2002 8:29 am
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i'd definately agree that the editing in this video is not as aggresive as the song is and it could have been a lot more action orientated, but like you said the idea wasn't bad, so i think that's why he edited the way he did
the more flowing nature to the video definately reflected imo what you were going for, but still... i think there was way too much buildup in a couple of scenes
my biggest gripe: the bison scene with 'awaken evil inside' (or something like that) the video isn't about Bison, so that scene was not necessary and the fact that Ken doesn't HAVE the evil inside would have led me to find a different song
also the huge buildup scene before Ken Shoryukens Vega was really drawn out and i thought the buildup was initially to compete against Ryu's Hadouken
i like the competativeness you showed with Ryu with the way that Ken will 'never live up to me'
video quality was average, sound seemed fine, nothing groundbreaking
overall smooth.... maybe TOO slow paced, but worth having a discussion on
the more flowing nature to the video definately reflected imo what you were going for, but still... i think there was way too much buildup in a couple of scenes
my biggest gripe: the bison scene with 'awaken evil inside' (or something like that) the video isn't about Bison, so that scene was not necessary and the fact that Ken doesn't HAVE the evil inside would have led me to find a different song
also the huge buildup scene before Ken Shoryukens Vega was really drawn out and i thought the buildup was initially to compete against Ryu's Hadouken
i like the competativeness you showed with Ryu with the way that Ken will 'never live up to me'
video quality was average, sound seemed fine, nothing groundbreaking
overall smooth.... maybe TOO slow paced, but worth having a discussion on
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Mind Benda
- Joined: Sat Feb 26, 2005 5:57 pm
Thanks...
I tried to show the general thought process of Ken at the time, the bison choking chun li was what fueled the anger and hatred for bison. Then the process begain, since it was new to ken he tried to remember ryu's gathering of hado, sinc ehe couldn't aim, he had to draw upon the vega fight to focus the energy.
as for the song i tried to shy away from linkin park, and the other suggestion was to use bottom by tool, which was entirely too long who would D/L a 7 minute vid?
Again thanks for the feedback
I tried to show the general thought process of Ken at the time, the bison choking chun li was what fueled the anger and hatred for bison. Then the process begain, since it was new to ken he tried to remember ryu's gathering of hado, sinc ehe couldn't aim, he had to draw upon the vega fight to focus the energy.
as for the song i tried to shy away from linkin park, and the other suggestion was to use bottom by tool, which was entirely too long who would D/L a 7 minute vid?
Again thanks for the feedback