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AWA Masters Video Up

Post by anneke » Thu Nov 04, 2004 11:30 am

My AWA Master's video is up for download.

Video Title: Choices
Type: Drama
Uses: Kenshin OAV, Trigun, X the movie, and Vamp D. Bloodlust.

YES, there are spoilers in this video.

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=48985

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Post by Flint the Dwarf » Thu Nov 04, 2004 12:01 pm

Are the spoilers for Trigun very big? More importantly, would someone who hasn't seen any of the anime recognize a spoiler when he saw it? I've seen the other three, so I wouldn't mind spoilers for those.
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Post by SSJVegita0609 » Thu Nov 04, 2004 12:13 pm

I like your anime choices :up:

*downloads*
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Post by SSJVegita0609 » Thu Nov 04, 2004 12:57 pm

EXCELLENT use of cuts and scene selection for the lyrics. I enjoyed this one quite a bit. My only complaint were the 3-4 scenes of people talking, which hurt the otherwise flawless mood and flow of the motion in the clips. Very good work.

Debating between 4 or 5 stars, will rate about watching a few more times.
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Post by Flint the Dwarf » Thu Nov 04, 2004 1:30 pm

Well, someone told me the Trigun spoilers were nothing I'd really recognize so I went ahead and watched it.

Lyrically, one of the better videos I've had the privilege of watching. I loved all the symbolism, and each line seemed to strike a chord. It flowed very well, which surprises me considering it was multi-anime. I've never considered using more than one anime for a song with a story like this.

The editing was... not what I hoped it would be. The atmosphere was great in most parts, but some scene selection seemed out of place (most of those could be attributed to the fact that I haven't seen Trigun, however). It also did flow fairly well. But sometimes there was too much regular-speed action, and the song doesn't call for action. I think you could have made it more moody and atmospheric with a slightly different sort of editing, and that would have complemented the story. Really, I don't like to criticize editing. You did what was needed, and possibly, in your mind, beyond. But I would have loved more.

I can't decide whether I want to give it a 3 or a 4. One one hand, taking on a song like this with four different anime and doing it well deserves quite a bit of respect. On the other hand, I think you're an experienced enough editor to do something more with the editing.

Regardless, it was a good video.
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Post by anneke » Thu Nov 04, 2004 6:35 pm

Thank you for the feedback on the video.

As for the action... You can't have a video about a bunch of fighters without some action. The choices they make is in their actions, not in their standing still.

Lip flaps... I'll have to see when those were... The scenes were far more important then if people were talking in them or not.

I'm just happy that this video and my Amadeus video are both about balancing the footage with the music, and it's good to hear I succeeded in that.

I just think if I used different editing, I wouldn't have covered what I wanted to in the video.

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Post by Swordfish23 » Thu Nov 04, 2004 7:27 pm

I liked the video, pretty good job. Not great but good. Didnt like the song at all..sure the lyrics worked but just seemed to be a rather weak song to me. Nevertheless still good.
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Post by Flint the Dwarf » Thu Nov 04, 2004 7:36 pm

anneke wrote:I just think if I used different editing, I wouldn't have covered what I wanted to in the video.
Like I said, I don't like to criticize editing style. I don't like when people criticize my style, because I usually have my own reasons for editing the way I did. I did like the video though, don't get me wrong.
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Post by ReXMaster » Thu Nov 04, 2004 8:38 pm

well im downloading it right now i well give u my feback on it in alittle bit

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Re: AWA Masters Video Up

Post by ReXMaster » Thu Nov 04, 2004 8:55 pm

anneke wrote:My AWA Master's video is up for download.

Video Title: Choices
Type: Drama
Uses: Kenshin OAV, Trigun, X the movie, and Vamp D. Bloodlust.

YES, there are spoilers in this video.

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=48985

Anneke
good video kick ass but to slow of a song so i give it a 4/5 and those talk clip thouse off the hole video

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