Love Won't Sleep ◤Hyouka AMV◥

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Love Won't Sleep ◤Hyouka AMV◥

Post by ChrisAMVMaker » Mon May 09, 2016 1:28 pm

This time I made one anime only and its a Romance AMV. I had a lot of fun making it and as my second AMV I think it turned up pretty well. Tell me what you didn't liked so I can improve in my next amv


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Re: Love Won't Sleep ◤Hyouka AMV◥

Post by ChrisAMVMaker » Tue May 10, 2016 3:06 pm

No opinions?

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Re: Love Won't Sleep ◤Hyouka AMV◥

Post by post-it » Tue May 10, 2016 8:10 pm

.. not much to see, too much slicing and dicing to watch anything.

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Re: Love Won't Sleep ◤Hyouka AMV◥

Post by ChrisAMVMaker » Wed May 11, 2016 2:04 pm

Probably becuase it fits the song? These kind of opinions don't help me, please be more specific

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Re: Love Won't Sleep ◤Hyouka AMV◥

Post by Kireblue » Wed May 11, 2016 2:19 pm

The editing was pretty solid :up: . My only advice to you is to be a little more mindful of the colors and tints of your scenes. You kept switching between scenes that had completely different tints and background colors, and it caused some of your transitions to not look as smooth as they could have.

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Re: Love Won't Sleep ◤Hyouka AMV◥

Post by post-it » Wed May 11, 2016 6:53 pm

.. you WANT to play Pick-A-Part, no problem; here we go:
1) where is the scene taking place?
2) are only the Characters the story?
3) is there a motivation that compels this situation?
4) flashing lights are usually a warning sign; tints are at the for-front of Everything!

you've got the editing and timing down-pat! its the scene displacement that has nothing to be followed!
. if you were a "Little Red Riding Hood" story teller, your fractured fairy tale would be seen as "Riding-Hoods-Anonymous" without
defining Hoods and Anonymous; you might as well have the WolF reading from "that book" as Written by "Little Red" herself!

it sometimes helps to watch how much time your Codec's are working on encoding your AMVs if only to notice that some
scenes require more time to compress than other scenes.
Live Action encodes easier than Animation. ( less scene changing )
Complete Episodes encode easier than AMV's. ( cleaning your video helps a lot. )
Your AMV is loaded with "Codec Overload" when played-back most of it; newbe mistake.

my advise is simple, get with the Guru's at this org and have kireblue help you find a good "Scene Detection Filter" for AMV's.

- just my opinion

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